[Bug 27499] New: Editorial problems with XQuery Update Facility 3.0 draft dated 2014-12-03

https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=27499

            Bug ID: 27499
           Summary: Editorial problems with XQuery Update Facility 3.0
                    draft dated 2014-12-03
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Last Call drafts
          Hardware: All
                OS: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: minor
          Priority: P2
         Component: Update 3.0
          Assignee: john.snelson@marklogic.com
          Reporter: jim.melton@acm.org
        QA Contact: public-qt-comments@w3.org

I have reviewed the 2014-12-03 draft of the XQuery Update Facility 3.0
candidate LCWD document and have discovered the following editorial issues that
I commend to the principal editor for his resolution:

1) section 4.5 text says "...if the value for a..."

Perhaps it should say "...if the StringLiteral for a..." or "...if the value of
the StringLiteral for a..."


2) section 5.8 text says "...if the value for a..."

Perhaps it should say "...if the PragmaContents for a..." or "...if the value
of the PragmaContents for a..."


3) section 7.1, Additional Semantics item 1 says:
      Any pending update lists returned...

Perhaps it should say:
      Pending update lists, if any, returned...
or
      All pending update lists returned...


4) section 7.4, 3rd bullet reads:
     If query mode is query, an error is raised if test is an updating
expression [err:XUST0001]. 

It should read:
     If query mode is query and test is an updating expression, an error is
raised [err:XUST0001]. 


5) sections 7.1, 7.2, and 7.3, 3rd bullet (in all three sections) have the same
sort of problem as section 7.4, 3rd bullet.


6) sections 7.10 and 7.11, the last paragraph (in both sections) says:
     Any pending update lists returned...

It should say:
     Pending update lists, if any, returned...
or
     All pending update lists returned...


7) sections 7.12, 7.14, and 7.15, second bullet (in all three sections)
contains:
     If any operand expressions...

It should contain:
     If any operand expression...
That is, the plural should be singular. 


8) Appendix B, item 4 reads:
     The default quer" mode for this implementation.

It should read:
     The default query mode for this implementation.


59 The definition of "vacuous expression" contains the
   phrase "REMOVE ME:" followed by two sentences. 

Is the intent that the entire definition be removed?

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