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[Bug 20351] New: 4.2: "depends on" relation (editorial)

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Date: Wed, 12 Dec 2012 06:46:57 +0000
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https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=20351

            Bug ID: 20351
           Summary: 4.2: "depends on" relation (editorial)
    Classification: Unclassified
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Member-only Editors Drafts
          Hardware: All
                OS: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: minor
          Priority: P2
         Component: XQuery 3.0
          Assignee: jonathan.robie@gmail.com
          Reporter: jmdyck@ibiblio.org
        QA Contact: public-qt-comments@w3.org
             Group: XSLXQuery_WG

In 4.2 "Module Declaration"...

"[Definition: a variable value (or the context item) depends on another
variable value (or the context item) if, during the evaluation of the
initializing expression of the former, the latter is accessed through the
module context.]"

 -- s/ a / A /

 -- Shouldn't the words "depends on" be in bold?

"In the following example, the variable value $a depend onthe variable value $b
..."

 -- s/onthe/on the/

 -- s/depend on/depends on/

 -- $a is not a variable value, it's (roughly) the name of a variable.
    So s/the variable value $a/the value of variable $a/
    Ditto $b.

"This graph may not contain cycles ..."

 -- s/may not/must not/

Lastly, this stuff doesn't belong here. Section 4.2 is about module
declarations, which only occur in library modules, but the 'depends on'
relation and error XQDY0054 are just as applicable to main modules.
Move it to 4.16 "Variable Declaration"?

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