[Bug 12599] New: Miscellaneous minor editorial issues in latest XPath 3.0 draft

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=12599

           Summary: Miscellaneous minor editorial issues in latest XPath
                    3.0 draft
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Member-only Editors Drafts
          Platform: All
               URL: http://www.w3.org/XML/Group/qtspecs/specifications/xqu
                    ery-30/html/xpath-30.html
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: trivial
          Priority: P5
         Component: XPath 3.0
        AssignedTo: jonathan.robie@redhat.com
        ReportedBy: zongaro@ca.ibm.com
         QAContact: public-qt-comments@w3.org


In verifying fixes to some problems reported against an earlier draft of XPath
2.1, I noticed a few minor editorial problems in the current XPath 3.0 draft.

1) In the first paragraph of 2.5.6.3 and in the first note in section 3.3.4,
there are references to the "XQuery implementation."  That should probably say
one of, "implementation," "processor," or "XPath 3.0 processor."

2) In section 2.2.4, the last two paragraphs speak of "output declarations,"
but those are XQuery-specific.

3) There are various references in XPath 3.0 to error messages that were
previously XQuery specific:  err:XQST0046, err:XQST0039, err:XQST0070,
err:XQST0034.  It would be nice if they began with "XP" rather than "XQ" - I
don't know whether you could make an editorial decision on this one, or the
working groups should be consulted.

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Received on Wednesday, 4 May 2011 18:38:42 UTC