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[Bug 4706] [FT] editorial: 3.3.1 Case Option

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Date: Sat, 23 Jun 2007 10:01:15 +0000
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           Summary: [FT] editorial: 3.3.1 Case Option
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Last Call drafts
          Platform: All
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: minor
          Priority: P2
         Component: Full Text
        AssignedTo: jim.melton@acm.org
        ReportedBy: jmdyck@ibiblio.org
         QAContact: public-qt-comments@w3.org


3.3.1 Case Option

[1]
list
'Using the option "..." tokens and phrases ...'
    Insert comma before "tokens".

[2]
"The following table summarizes the interactions between the case match
options and the use of the default collation."
    I think you need a preceding intro sentence, something like:
        Matching is also affected by the query's default collation (see
        section 2.1.1 and 4.4 in XQuery spec).

[3]
Case Matrix
    [3a]
    This table is somewhat confusing. It would help to use <th> elements
    (assuming they are rendered distinctively).

    [3b]
    Also, the upper-left cell
        "Default collation options/Case options"
    should I think be
        "case option \ default collation option "
    (See "S\T" in the F+O spec.)
    Or, more clearly, "case option" could be put in a rowspan=4 cell to
    the left of the case options, and "default collation option" could be
    put in a colspan=3 cell above the collation choices.

    [3c]
    Also, you need to explain what "lowercase(Expr) + UCC" (etc) means.
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