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[Bug 4706] [FT] editorial: 3.3.1 Case Option

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Date: Sat, 23 Jun 2007 10:01:15 +0000
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           Summary: [FT] editorial: 3.3.1 Case Option
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Last Call drafts
          Platform: All
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: minor
          Priority: P2
         Component: Full Text
        AssignedTo: jim.melton@acm.org
        ReportedBy: jmdyck@ibiblio.org
         QAContact: public-qt-comments@w3.org

3.3.1 Case Option

'Using the option "..." tokens and phrases ...'
    Insert comma before "tokens".

"The following table summarizes the interactions between the case match
options and the use of the default collation."
    I think you need a preceding intro sentence, something like:
        Matching is also affected by the query's default collation (see
        section 2.1.1 and 4.4 in XQuery spec).

Case Matrix
    This table is somewhat confusing. It would help to use <th> elements
    (assuming they are rendered distinctively).

    Also, the upper-left cell
        "Default collation options/Case options"
    should I think be
        "case option \ default collation option "
    (See "S\T" in the F+O spec.)
    Or, more clearly, "case option" could be put in a rowspan=4 cell to
    the left of the case options, and "default collation option" could be
    put in a colspan=3 cell above the collation choices.

    Also, you need to explain what "lowercase(Expr) + UCC" (etc) means.
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