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[Bug 1497] New: Editorial: grammar in 7.3.1

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Date: Tue, 14 Jun 2005 20:14:19 +0000
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           Summary: Editorial: grammar in 7.3.1
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Last Call drafts
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Linux
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Functions and Operators
        AssignedTo: ashok.malhotra@oracle.com
        ReportedBy: frans.englich@telia.com
         QAContact: public-qt-comments@w3.org


Hello,

While doubtable whether there actually is an error, the harm is small for
considering if there is:

In the fourth paragraph in section 7.3.1, found in XPath Function & Operators of
the fourth April Working Draft, the following sentence exists:

"For alignment with the [Character Model for the World Wide Web 1.0],
applications may choose collations that treat unnormalized strings as though
they were normalized (that is, that implicitly normalize the strings)."

I find the text in the paragraph to sound strange, the second "that". From the
top of my head, I would rather have it to read:

"For alignment with the [Character Model for the World Wide Web 1.0],
applications may choose collations that treat unnormalized strings as though
they were normalized (that is, to implicitly normalize the strings)."

"that" replaced with "to".



Cheers,

        Frans
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