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[Bug 1539] New: [FS] editorial: 2.4.3 Content models

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Date: Sun, 10 Jul 2005 08:06:34 +0000
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           Summary: [FS] editorial: 2.4.3 Content models
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Last Call drafts
          Platform: All
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Formal Semantics
        AssignedTo: simeon@us.ibm.com
        ReportedBy: jmdyck@ibiblio.org
         QAContact: public-qt-comments@w3.org

2.4.3 Content models

[25 (Formal)] Occurrence ::= "*" | "+" | "?"
    It would be simpler to just use OccurrenceIndicator.

"but it more general has it applies to arbitrary types"
    Insert "is" before "more"
    Change "has" to "as".

"Where the interleaving of two sequences of items ..."
    This is not a sentence.
    s/. Where/, where/  or  s/Where the/The/

para 4 & 5 (Both beginning with 'The "&" operator')
    There's a lot of overlap between these two paragraphs.

"Types precedence order: Associativity"
    As far as I can tell, all three binary operators are associative, i.e.
        (A op B) op C = A op (B op C)
    so there's no need to define their associativity.
    And associativity of unary operators is meaningless.
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