These are editorial comments on XQuery 1.0 and XPath 2.0 Formal Semantics W3C Working Draft 20 February 2004 http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-xquery-semantics-20040220/ * the document is 1.5 Mo big ; could you split it? this doesn't forbid to also provide the one-page version as well, but being able to access the cover page without downloading the whole doc would be really good. * the table of contents is formatted with non breakable spaces ; why not using imbricated <ul> or <ol> instead, with proper CSS ? * please don't use the <font> tag ; CSS can replace all its usages more efficiently * you're using mathematical notations all around the document ; have you thought to use MathML for them instead of HTML tables? and for the simplest ones, instead of imitating the mathematical signs, what about using the real mathematical signs in Unicode? e.g. => is ⇒ and |- is ⊢ (::= is ⩴, but is less likely to appear correctly in most browsers) * <p><b>Notation</b></p> (and alike) are misusing paragraphs and bold text for what really are headings ; I suggest using either the <h*> tags or using <dl><dt><dd> when more appropriate Dom -- Dominique Hazaël-Massieux - http://www.w3.org/People/Dom/ W3C/ERCIM mailto:dom@w3.orgReceived on Monday, 22 March 2004 08:56:12 GMT
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