- From: Nick Kew <nick@webthing.com>
- Date: Fri, 2 Apr 2004 10:00:56 +0100 (BST)
- To: Olivier Thereaux <ot@w3.org>
- Cc: QA Dev <public-qa-dev@w3.org>
On Thu, 1 Apr 2004, Olivier Thereaux wrote: > Ville, (and everyone), > > Can you give this a look and help me improve this release text by tomorrow? > It is loosely based on the text that was sent at the time of the beta > test, back at the end of february. [ aaargh - I can't figure out how to get pine to include the attachment, so I'll just cut&paste. ] The language of the whole thing is a bit flowery - though not as bad as many product announcements. > It is with great pleasure that we are announcing today the first s/are announcing/announce/ A more usual wording is "We are pleased to announce ..." > finding broken links and solving authentication issues made easy! "solving authentication issues"? > Previously bundled as part of the W3C Markup Validator suite, the free > online W3C link checker service has been updated with this latest > release version: > > http://validator.w3.org/checklink > In addition to that, we now distribute checklink as a free, standalone > tool, which should be very easy to install and use as a commandline > tool, or a service on your Web site. /me not comfortable with that; tries to reword. This is the software driving the W3C link checker service http://validator.w3.org/checklink Previously bundled with the W3C Markup Validator suite, checklink is now available for download as a free, standalone tool which can be installed locally either as a commandline utility or a web-based service. -- Nick Kew
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