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Re: PROV-ISSUE-210 (TLebo): 7.1 PROV-DM Interpretation diagram and interpretation definitions disorderly

From: Luc Moreau <L.Moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
Date: Wed, 11 Jan 2012 11:46:36 +0000
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Hi Tim,
I will implement your suggestions when I go through the document.
Luc

On 01/05/2012 06:19 PM, Provenance Working Group Issue Tracker wrote:
> PROV-ISSUE-210 (TLebo): 7.1 PROV-DM Interpretation diagram and interpretation definitions disorderly
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> http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/210
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> Raised by: Timothy Lebo
> On product:
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> The diagram at [1] illustrates subfigures a-h
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> Below the figure, the definition of the illustrations are listed.
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> For example, subfigure a "start-precedes-end" is followed by definition of "starts-precedes-end"
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> Two readability (not content) issues:
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> ISSUE A:
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> Following the pattern above, I would expect the second definition after the diagram to be "generation-precedes-usage", but it is missing.
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> ISSUE B:
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> It is not clear, without in-depth reading, whether a definition is described in the narrative _above_ or _below_ the definition itself. This is compounded by ISSUE A above, where some definitions are missing. I suggest to begin the narrative describing the definition by referencing either the subfigure or the definition, e.g., "As in subfigure a, the following definition start-precedes-end ..."
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> Thanks for your consideration.
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> Regards,
> Tim
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> [1] http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/ProvenanceModel.html#interpretation
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