- From: Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@cdt.org>
- Date: Fri, 21 Jun 2013 11:50:24 -0400
- To: "public-privacy@w3.org" <public-privacy@w3.org>
Very good work, Frank! This is a superb first draft. I can't make the PING Call time due to another commitment (it would be great to schedule the following call at the end of each meeting, even without an agenda, simply so I have it in my calendar). Some (mostly high-level) comments on the draft: * errant angle bracket: The text of the PING email link at the very beginning should be "public-privacy@w3.org" and not "public-privacy@w3.org>" * Am I right in thinking that the second if/then in the flowchart in Section 2 which says, "Will std or spec generate data?" is a bit broad? Is any generation of data really a trigger for privacy review? Do we want to have such a hair trigger? I can imagine maybe the rationale for a hair trigger is, "Well, if it's innocuous data generation, you won't have much of the SPA to do." I guess I wonder if that piece can't be fine-tuned a bit more. Maybe "Will std or spec generate personal data?" * Do we really need to acronymize specification under review (SUR)? Can't we just s/SUR/spec/g ? * s/individual&hypen;s/individual's/ * step 5: Are there good pointers to threat analysis/modeling materials that someone conducting a SPA can use to give them an idea or recipe on how to do that? best, Joe On Thu Jun 20 08:22:44 2013, Christine Runnegar wrote: > Thank you very much Frank and Nick! > > All, > > Frank has put a lot of work into developing this draft. We know many of you are busy in the Tracking Protection WG, but please take a little time to look at the draft before the call next week (and ideally, start sharing your input on this list). > > Christine and Tara > > On Jun 20, 2013, at 12:35 AM, Frank.Dawson@nokia.com wrote: > >> Hei All. >> Thanks to Nick for coaching, the SPA document with graphics can be found on github at http://yrlesru.github.io/SPA/. >> Frank/ >> >> > > -- Joseph Lorenzo Hall Senior Staff Technologist Center for Democracy & Technology 1634 I ST NW STE 1100 Washington DC 20006-4011 (p) 202-407-8825 (f) 202-637-0968 joe@cdt.org PGP: https://josephhall.org/gpg-key fingerprint: BE7E A889 7742 8773 301B 4FA1 C0E2 6D90 F257 77F8
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