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Re: SPA Document Posted On GitHub

From: Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@cdt.org>
Date: Fri, 21 Jun 2013 11:50:24 -0400
Message-ID: <51C47640.5020108@cdt.org>
To: "public-privacy@w3.org" <public-privacy@w3.org>
Very good work, Frank! This is a superb first draft.

I can't make the PING Call time due to another commitment (it would be
great to schedule the following call at the end of each meeting, even
without an agenda, simply so I have it in my calendar).

Some (mostly high-level) comments on the draft:

* errant angle bracket: The text of the PING email link at the very
beginning should be "public-privacy@w3.org" and not "public-privacy@w3.org>"

* Am I right in thinking that the second if/then in the flowchart in
Section 2 which says, "Will std or spec generate data?" is a bit broad?
Is any generation of data really a trigger for privacy review? Do we
want to have such a hair trigger? I can imagine maybe the rationale for
a hair trigger is, "Well, if it's innocuous data generation, you won't
have much of the SPA to do." I guess I wonder if that piece can't be
fine-tuned a bit more. Maybe "Will std or spec generate personal data?"

* Do we really need to acronymize specification under review (SUR)?
Can't we just s/SUR/spec/g ?

* s/individual&hypen;s/individual's/

* step 5: Are there good pointers to threat analysis/modeling materials
that someone conducting a SPA can use to give them an idea or recipe on
how to do that?

best, Joe

On Thu Jun 20 08:22:44 2013, Christine Runnegar wrote:
> Thank you very much Frank and Nick!
>
> All,
>
> Frank has put a lot of work into developing this draft. We know many of you are busy in the Tracking Protection WG, but please take a little time to look at the draft before the call next week (and ideally, start sharing your input on this list).
>
> Christine and Tara
>
> On Jun 20, 2013, at 12:35 AM, Frank.Dawson@nokia.com wrote:
>
>> Hei All.
>> Thanks to Nick for coaching, the SPA document with graphics can be found on github at http://yrlesru.github.io/SPA/.
>> Frank/
>>
>>
>
>
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