Re: Comments on new version of primer

Attached are my comments on the new version. For quickness I have
overwritten the original text using <ins> and <del> HTML markup. This
looks rather drastic but is meant to be constructive; the editors can
make of them what they will.

best regards,

Alan




On 28/03/2008, Scheppe, Kai-Dietrich <k.scheppe@telekom.de> wrote:
>  <<WD-powder-primer-20080326.htm>> Hi,
>
>  After the London meeting I have made the discussed changes in the
>  document and added Diana's part.
>
>  I would appreciate input to the document in general, some input on those
>  items outlined as a pinkish editor's note and also a thorough going
>  through on a technical level.
>
>
>  Thanks
>
> Kai
>
>


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