Re: Draft Edit: We need personalization because...

Those edits look good to me, John.  Thanks for working on those edits.

-becky

> On Nov 26, 2019, at 10:39 AM, John Foliot <john.foliot@deque.com> wrote:
> 
> Greetings All,
> 
> After our call yesterday, I took the opportunity to go back and try my hand on an editorial edit to the Explainer page <https://w3c.github.io/personalization-semantics/#why_accessibility>. My suggested edits can be found at:
> https://github.com/w3c/personalization-semantics/wiki/We-need-personalization-because <https://github.com/w3c/personalization-semantics/wiki/We-need-personalization-because>
> 
> For the group's consideration.
> 
> JF 
> 
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