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some minor typos

From: Sören Preibusch <spreibusch@diw.de>
Date: 21-Feb-2006 12:53:48 CET
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** TYPOS:
section 1.1.1: In the 10th list item, "JURISDICTION" instead of
"JURSIDICTION"
section 3.3.6.1: URI of 95/46/EC:
http://europa.eu.int/eur-lex/lex/LexUriServ/LexUriServ.do?uri=CELEX:31995L0046:EN:HTML

(the same URI could be used in Appendix 7, section "Information Privacy")
section 3.4: eventually capitalize the "should" in "The Other category
should be used only when ..."
section 4.5: change "policwoesy" to "policy"
section 5.6: remove whitespace in tag in "By using the <  dynamic>"
section 6.4: change "in section 4 of the P3P 1.0 Specificaiton or section
?? of the P3P 1.1 specification" to "in section 4 of the P3P 1.0
Specification or section 4 of the P3P 1.1 specification"
section 6.5: hyperlink reference to section 2.4.4 in first paragraphe
section 6.5: change "RATIONAEL" to "RATIONALE" in list item 2.
section 6.6: change "see section 1.3.3 Identity Definitions" to "see
section 1.3 Identity Definitions"

** CLARIFICATION
section 1.3: add "95/46/EC" after "Directive" so that the quotation is more
accurate


Best wishes, Sören Preibusch.
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