Re: comments on latest working draft

Am Wednesday 09 June 2004 17:24 verlautbarte Humphrey, Jack :
> Edited my comments to use example.org (instead of example2.com) and
> example.net (instead of myagent.com):
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Humphrey, Jack [mailto:JHumphrey@coremetrics.com]
> Sent: Wednesday, May 26, 2004 10:37 PM
> To: public-p3p-spec
> Subject: RE: comments on latest working draft
>
>
>
> I agree with Lorrie's recommended changes to section 2.3.2.9, with
> the following additions:
Done
>
> 2.3.2.9 rewrite intro paragraph as follows (with link moved to
> references section as Lorrie suggested):
>
> This section describes a method to allow user agents to recognize
> when hosts in different domains are owned by the same entity or
> entities acting as agents for one another. User agents may use this
> information when applying privacy preferences, particularly to avoid
> implementation issues encountered when more stringent privacy
> preferences are applied to domains that are deemed to be owned by
> third-parties

Done
> . 
>
> 2.3.2.9.1 examples
>
> need to change "instance.example.com" to "example.org" (6
> occurrences). The example is not powerful unless it demonstrates
> different domains (it used to be forinstance.com)

Done, but changed everything to example.net
>
> need to change "*.myagent.example" in second example to
> "*.example.net"

Done, but changed to example.org

>
> 2.3.2.9.3
>
> "to the OUR-HOSTS declarations" --> "to the OUR-HOST declarations"
>
> replace "instance.example.com" with "example.org"
>
Done

Rigo