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Re: Mini editorial comment son the QRG

From: Ivan Herman <ivan@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 27 May 2009 15:16:48 +0200
Message-ID: <4A1D3D40.6010107@w3.org>
To: Jie Bao <baojie@cs.rpi.edu>
CC: W3C OWL Working Group <public-owl-wg@w3.org>
That was quick:-)

Thanks!

Ivan

Jie Bao wrote:
> Hi Ivan
> 
> I implemented all your suggestions, please check the diff
> 
> http://www.w3.org/2007/OWL/wiki/index.php?title=Quick_Reference_Guide&diff=24171&oldid=24161
> 
> Thank you for the kind review.
> 
> Jie
> 
> On Wed, May 27, 2009 at 8:44 AM, Ivan Herman <ivan@w3.org> wrote:
>> Hi Jie,
>>
>> just tiny thing (just in time before tonight's vote on the QRG:-)
>>
>> - Section 1, table on notational conventions, first column last entry: a
>> missing opening '(' is missing...
>>
>> - You've put, in section 2.2, a link to
>>
>> http://www.w3.org/2007/OWL/wiki/Syntax#def_object_property
>>
>> in the functional syntax cell for named object property; you should
>> probably do the same in 2.1 for the named class for symmetry
>>
>> - Section 2.5, table on Assertions, there is a missing link to the
>> primer for 'individual equality' (the link is actually identical to the
>> one for inequality)
>>
>> - In the same table you have a line for 'positive inverse object
>> property assertion'. I am not 100% sure it is necessary to have it
>> there, it seems to reflect the combination of other things in the
>> functional syntax, and the RDF version is, well, trivial...
>>
>> - Section 2.8, line on prefix declaration: the "@prefix p U." cell for
>> RDF syntax might be misunderstood. The way to set the prefix depends on
>> the serialization and this entry suggests that this is a generic RDF
>> syntax for it (which is not). I would suggest to leave the cell entry or
>> put a note into it saying that this depends on RDF serialization... (eg,
>> SPARQL uses a different syntax...)
>>
>>
>> Cheers
>>
>> Ivan
>>
>>
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>>
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> 
> 
> 

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