RE: documents staged in place

Hi!

First, all looks fine to me for the RDF-Based Semantics.

But I found several general issues, the first being 
particularly important:

1. Schedule
-----------

I don't understand why the "Status of the Document"
tells:

  "Please Comment By 30 July 2009"

How can we then keep our time line as defined in

  <http://www.w3.org/2007/OWL/wiki/Timeline>

According to this timeline, we plan want to publish 
our spec as PR on 1st of August, i.e. the day after 
the comment period ends!

2. Color Diff
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This document is already marked as the final "CR"
(why not as an "ED", as always?), but still contains 
the "color diff" to the right of the "Previous Version" 
in the header of the document. I think this should 
be removed in the published version, since I think it 
is only for WG-internal checking (we never had this 
in any of our previously published WDs, AFAIR).

3. Typo in PDFs
---------------

As already reported earlier, all the PDFs have on the
left hand side of the header of each page a text like:

  "OWL 2 Web Ontology LanguageDocument Overview"

i.e. there is no white space between the generic
"OWL 2 Web Ontology Language" string and the 
document title. Should be fixed.

Michael

>-----Original Message-----
>From: public-owl-wg-request@w3.org [mailto:public-owl-wg-request@w3.org]
>On Behalf Of Sandro Hawke
>Sent: Thursday, June 11, 2009 7:52 AM
>To: public-owl-wg@w3.org
>Subject: documents staged in place
>
>
>As the final stage before publication, I've put the documents into their
>expected publication locations, all linked from:
>
>  http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-owl2-overview-
>20090611/#Documentation_Roadmap
>
>I'm in the process of doing the mechanical checks, but there are various
>possible failures that it's hard for me to spot, so editors please take
>one more look at your documents as soon as possible.
>
>I've included the color-coded diffs here, which I was leaving out in TRs
>in the past because the changes were so huge.  Here the changes (since
>LC) are mostly pretty small, so these diffs are quite readable for most
>docs.
>
>     -- Sandro
>

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