RE: new snapshots, with PDF

Hi Sandro!

A few things:

* (all documents, Ian and Alan please have a look) The Acknowledgements
section ends by:

    "We would also like to thank two past members 
    of the working group: Jeremy Carroll, 
    and Vipul Kashyap."

I don't remember Vipul having left the WG, but I remember Jim Hendler having
left it.

* (all documents) I don't know whether this is only the case for the
snapshots: The document titles don't start with:

    "OWL 2 Web Ontology Language:"

The current working drafts actually do start with this line (and of course
they should do).

* RDF-Based Semantics: The first entry in the "References" section is still
in its "template-style" form. I can fill all data in the Wiki version of the
document, if you like, now that things are more stable. But you may also
decide to do it yourself only in the snapshots, if you wish. Please tell me
your preference.

* (all documents) PDF: The red "W3C Editor's Draft" mark doesn't look nice
(characters have "stairs"). Same for the "W3C" logo. Perhaps, these figures
should not be a PNG but SVG? But, perhaps, this idea is rather for the
future.

* PDF of RDF-Based Semantics (possibly other documents, too): Some cross
references aren't translated into hyperlinks, while others are. For example,
in the first paragraph of Section 6.2, none of the three cross references
(blue) are clickable links, while the following reference "Table 6.1" /is/
clickable. In the snapshot, however, /all/ these cross references are
clickable. 

* Regarding the tables in the PDF version of the RDF-Based Semantics: They
are technically ok (don't suffer from the same problem as the "allowed
vocabulary" table in the Structural Spec). But the line breaking is in some
cases pretty ugly. After publication, I will consider formatting the table
entries a bit, and perhaps a somewhat smaller font might also be helpful.

Michael

>-----Original Message-----
>From: public-owl-wg-request@w3.org [mailto:public-owl-wg-request@w3.org]
>On Behalf Of Sandro Hawke
>Sent: Friday, November 28, 2008 9:34 PM
>To: public-owl-wg@w3.org
>Subject: new snapshots, with PDF
>
>
>
>New snapshots, linked from
>http://www.w3.org/2007/OWL/draft/ED-owl2-syntax-20081128/
>
>They now include a PDF, generated by "prince", linked from just above
>the copyright.  I know of one problem with the PDFs, which is that wide
>tables just get truncated, as in Syntax p.11.  I don't know what to do
>about that.  (There's also a prince logo on the first page, only when
>displayed, because I'm using the free version.  I have a license which
>I'll try to figure out out how to install before really publishing.)
>
>Only three broken links left:
>
>  http://www.w3.org/2007/OWL/draft/ED-owl2-profiles-20081128/
>        ref-papa: line 1225
>
>  http://www.w3.org/2007/OWL/draft/ED-owl2-mapping-to-rdf-20081128/
>        Parsing_Ontology_Header_and_Declarations: line 2493
>
>  http://www.w3.org/2007/OWL/draft/ED-owl2-syntax-20081128/
>        Functional-Style_Syntax_Ontology_Documents: line 722
>
>The status text from Round_4 is not currently being inserted into these
>versions, so they wont pass pubrules yet.   (I might do that right now,
>and re-do these in place....)
>
>     -- Sandro


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