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Summary Points from Last Call

From: Ken Banks, kiwanja.net <donotreply@kiwanja.net>
Date: Mon, 21 Sep 2009 09:49:06 +0100
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Hi all

 

Here are the summary points from the last call, in advance of the call
today. Sorry I won't be able to make it - I had a previous appointment.

 

> Comments made were as follows:

> 

> ALL COST PARAGRAPHS SHOULD FOLLOW THIS FORMAT:

> 

> COST 6.1.5 -> COST FOR END USERS

> COST 6.2.4 -> COST FOR SERVICE PROVIDERS

> 

> THE DOCUMENT SHOULD BE READ THROUGH FOR CONSISTENCY, PROOF READING, 

> ETC .

> THERE ARE SOME INCONSISTENCIES IN THE TEXT WITH DATA, NUMBERS, STATS, ETC.

> 

> [THE PERSON WHO MADE THESE COMMENTS WROTE SECTION 6.3]

> 

> ALSO RENJISH STILL HAS SOME COMMENTS ON THE STRUCTURE WHICH HAVE NOT 

> BEEN ADDRESSED YET:

> 

> - the change in the structure (respective place of scope and exec 

> summary)

> - your proposed objectives section, as you were using an old version 

> and not the latest one provided by mira.

> - the change in the audience section

 

Thanks.

 

Ken

www.kiwanja.net

 

 
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