Re: Example box

Hello Team,

Here are my thoughts.

Real world examples help readers to understand the Roadmap. 

It also helps readers to neatly sort out contents of the Roadmap.

I'd suggest to place real cases in Appendix, with reference to each technology, voice, SMS, etc. The Appendix should be titled "Cases", rather than "Analysis", as I don't think we need to analyse each case in the Roadmap document. 

In the "Cases" section, putting a brief summary or explanatory title of each case with its link would be sufficient.

Cheers,
Yoshiko





----- Original message -----
From: Stephane Boyera <boyera@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 19 Aug 2009 14:24:42 +0200
Subject: Re: Example box
To: Mira Slavova <mira@mmd4d.org>
Cc: public-mw4d@w3.org

>Hi Mira,
>
>> Overall, I think text boxes of this kind will serve to demonstrate the 
>> relevance of the document, which can be fairly technical at time, and 
>> whose audience is rather broad.
>
>Few comments:
>i'm a bit reluctant to copy and paste in the document something from 
>sources not part of the group. Like this analysis of ivr is interesting 
>but done by those who made the project imho.
>What about for each of the category of technologies having an entry in 
>an appendix with the detailed analysis ? like from the ivr, we add a 
>link to 'detailed analysis of an ivr application in Appendix A.1' where 
>we put the doc you sent, with a link from the source ?
>
>So question to all: should that type of analysis, coming from external 
>source be in the body of the document, on the appendix, or just linked ?
>
>cheers
>stephane
>
>> Cheers,
>> Mira
>> 
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