Re: AW: W3C Blog about ITS2 - tunnels of disneyland

Hi Felix and Stephan,

great post, and good edits!

I made a few corrections, too, including changing one point back to 
Felix' original - its reads better, I think.

Kind regards,
olaf-michael

On 2013-11-05 17:48, Stephan Walter wrote:
> Hi Felix,
>
> nice post!
>
> Just made a few corrections (or at least I think they are corrections... ;)) with "track changes" on.
> Additionally I'd suggest a small text change to bring in the aspect of tools and automation also in the metaphor (also added with track changes).
>
> Best
> Stephan
>
> -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht-----
> Von: Felix Sasaki [mailto:fsasaki@w3.org]
> Gesendet: Dienstag, 5. November 2013 16:48
> An: public-multilingualweb-lt@w3.org
> Betreff: W3C Blog about ITS2 - tunnels of disneyland
>
> Hi all,
>
> since - as I said previously - W3C won't do a press release, I worked on a blog post about ITS2, taking the material from Dave & Pedro into acount and using a light metaphor: "the tunnels of disneyland"
>
> See attachment. Could you provide me with feedback by Wednesday morning?
> I then would have this published at
> http://www.w3.org/blog/
>
> The material is shorter and I tried to be funny ;) I also tried to bring everybody in via a link to the "acknowledgments" section and hope that this is OK that way.
>
> Best,
>
> Felix