Re: Draft misprints

2) The issue over organisational vs organizational - this is down to
whether this documents should be in British English (organisational) or
American English (organizational).  I had a look through W3C documentation
on this, but could not find the protocol listed anywhere, however from my
experience CSS for example is written in American English. Whichever is
correct it should at least be consistent throughout the doc.

3) Pedro is right it should be "these elements" not "theses"

Declan

On 30 November 2012 18:26, Felix Sasaki <fsasaki@w3.org> wrote:

>  Thanks a lot, Pablo. I tried to fix these. I'm not sure about 3), maybe
> a native speaker of English can help?
>
> Best,
>
> Felix
>
> Am 30.11.12 16:27, schrieb Pablo Nieto Caride:
>
>  Hi all,****
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>
> I found some misprints on the draft:****
>
> 1)      On the second paragraph says “First, it allows to identitytranslation agents” should be identify
> ****
>
> 2)      I’m not sure about this. On
> http://www.w3.org/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20.html#provenanceDefs says
> Organisational provenance information             Identification of an
> organization acting as a translation agent, shoud not be Organisational
> and organization or the other way around to be consistent? Maybe it’s not
> the same, I don’t know.****
>
> 3)      The description of Example 64 says at the end “with the content
> of theses elements” theses should be these.****
>
> 4)      On point 6.2 the third note says at the end “Each script element
> MUST NOT contain more then one rules element” then should be than.**
>
> 5)      STEP 1 of the domain algorithm says “the resulting string as aempty string” a should be an.
> ****
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> ** **
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> Cheers,****
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