CVS WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv12242

Modified Files:
	its20.odd 
Log Message:
Checked and ensured that lists are introduced by a ":" colon character.

--- /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20.odd	2013/06/23 17:50:43	1.477
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20.odd	2013/06/24 10:48:37	1.478
@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@
                 version of ITS.</p></item>
             
              <item> <p>The <ref target="#directionality">Directionality</ref> data category reflects directionality markup in <ptr target="#html4" type="bibref"/>. The reason is that enhancements are being discussed in the context of HTML5 that are expected to change the approach to marking up directionality, in particular to support content whose directionality needs to be isolated from that of surrounding content. However, these enhancements are not finalized yet. They will be reflected in a future revision of ITS.</p></item></list>
-            <p><emph>Additional or modified mechanisms:</emph> The following mechanisms from ITS 1.0 have been modified  or added to ITS 2.0.</p>
+            <p><emph>Additional or modified mechanisms:</emph> The following mechanisms from ITS 1.0 have been modified  or added to ITS 2.0:</p>
             
             <list>
               <item><p xml:id="query-language-on-rules-element">ITS 1.0 used only XPath as the mechanism for selecting nodes in <ref target="#basic-concepts-selection-global">global rules</ref>. ITS 2.0 allows for choosing the <ref target="#selectors">query language of selectors</ref>. The default is XPath 1.0. An ITS 2.0 processor is free to support other selection mechanisms, like CSS selectors or other versions of XPath.</p></item>
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@
   </list>
           
           
-          <p>ITS 2.0 provides the following data categories, using most of the existing ITS 1.0 data categories and adding new ones. Modifications of existing ITS 1.0 data categories are summarized in <ptr target="#high-level-differences-between-1.0-and-2.0" type="specref"/>.</p>
+          <p>ITS 2.0 provides the following data categories:</p>
           
           
           <list type="unordered">
@@ -528,7 +528,9 @@
             
             <item><ref target="#storagesize">Storage Size</ref>: specifies the maximum storage size
               of a given piece of content.</item></list>
-</div>
+
+          <p>Most of the existing ITS 1.0 data categories are included new ones have been added. Modifications of existing ITS 1.0 data categories are summarized in <ptr target="#high-level-differences-between-1.0-and-2.0" type="specref"/>.</p>
+        </div>
 
         <div xml:id="basic-concepts-selection">
           <head>Selection</head>
@@ -540,7 +542,7 @@
             with additional ITS dimensions such as inheritance and defaults.</p>
           <p>The mechanisms defined for ITS selection resemble those defined in <ptr
               target="#css2-1" type="bibref"/>. The local approach can be compared to the
-            <code>style</code> attribute in HTML/XHTML, and the global approach is similar to the <code>style</code> element in HTML/XHTML.</p>          
+            <code>style</code> attribute in HTML/XHTML, and the global approach is similar to the <code>style</code> element in HTML/XHTML:</p>          
           <list>
             <item>The local approach puts ITS markup in the relevant element of the host vocabulary
               (e.g. the <code>author</code> element in DocBook)</item>
@@ -786,7 +788,7 @@
         
         <div xml:id="implementing-its20">
           <head>ITS 2.0 Implementations and Conformance</head>
-          <p>What does it mean to implement ITS 2.0? This specification provides several conformance clauses as the normative answer (see <ptr type="specref" target="#conformance"/>). The clauses are targeted at different types of implementers.</p>
+          <p>What does it mean to implement ITS 2.0? This specification provides several conformance clauses as the normative answer (see <ptr type="specref" target="#conformance"/>). The clauses target different types of implementers:</p>
           <list type="unordered">
             <item>Conformance clauses in <ptr type="specref" target="#conformance-product-schema"/> tell markup vocabulary developers how to add ITS 2.0 markup declarations to their schemas.</item>
             <item>Conformance clauses in <ptr target="#conformance-product-processing-expectations" type="specref"/> tell implementers how to process XML content according to ITS 2.0 data categories.</item>
@@ -1652,7 +1654,7 @@
    translate="no">Dublin</span> in <b translate="no" its-within-text="yes">Ireland</b>!</h2></body></html>]]></eg>
           </exemplum>
           <p xml:id="its2nif-algorithm">The conversion algorithm to generate NIF consists of seven
-            steps.</p>
+            steps:</p>
           <list type="unordered">
             <item><p xml:id="its2nif-algorithm-step1">STEP 1: Get an ordered list of all text nodes
                 of the document.</p></item>
@@ -1819,7 +1821,7 @@
 
           <p>The value of <att>annotatorsRef</att> is a space-separated list of references where
             each reference is composed of two parts: a data category identifier and an IRI. These
-            two parts are separated by a <code>|</code> VERTICAL LINE (U+007C) character.</p>
+            two parts are separated by a <code>|</code> VERTICAL LINE (U+007C) character:</p>
 
           <list>
             <item><p>The data category identifier <ref target="#rfc2119">MUST</ref> be one of the
@@ -2065,8 +2067,8 @@
 
           <p>The following table summarizes for each data category which selection, default value,
             and inheritance and overriding behavior apply. It also provides data category
-            identifiers used in <ptr target="#its-tool-annotation" type="specref"/>.</p>
-          <p>Foreign elements can be used only inside <gi>rules</gi>. Foreign attributes can be used on any element defined in ITS.</p>
+            identifiers used in <ptr target="#its-tool-annotation" type="specref"/>:</p>
+          
           <list type="unordered">
             <item><p xml:id="def-default-values"><emph>Default values</emph> apply if both local and global selection
                 are absent. The default value for the <ref target="#trans-datacat">Translate</ref>
@@ -2085,6 +2087,9 @@
                   >Translate</ref> information conveyed by a global
               <gi>translateRule</gi>.</p></item>
           </list>
+          
+          <p>Foreign elements can be used only inside <gi>rules</gi>. Foreign attributes can be used on any element defined in ITS.</p>
+          
           <note><p xml:id="its-information_versus_content">An ITS application is free to decide what
               pieces of content it uses. For example:</p>
             <list type="unordered">
@@ -3488,7 +3493,7 @@
             <p>The list is comma-separated and can include the wildcard extended language range
                 <val>*</val>. The list can also be empty. Whitespace surrounding language ranges is
               ignored.</p>
-            <p>The type can take the values <val>include</val> or <val>exclude</val>.</p>
+            <p>The type can take the values <val>include</val> or <val>exclude</val>:</p>
             <list>
               <item><p>A single wildcard <val>*</val> with a type <val>include</val> indicates that
                   the selected content applies to all locales.</p></item>
@@ -5719,7 +5724,7 @@
 <http://dbpedia.org/resource/Ireland> 
  rdf:type <http:/nerd.eurecom.fr/ontology#Country> .]]></eg>
         <p xml:id="nif2its-algorithm">The conversion algorithm to generate ITS out of NIF consists
-          of two steps.</p>
+          of two steps:</p>
         <list type="unordered">
           <item>
             <p xml:id="nif2its-algorithm-step1">STEP 1: NIF Web services accept two different types of input. It is possible to either send the extracted text (the object of the <code>nif:isString</code> property) directly or  NIF RDF to the NLP tool, i.e. the text is sent as a <code>nif:Context</code> node and included as <code>nif:isString</code>. Either way, the output of the Web service will be a NIF representation.
@@ -5957,7 +5962,7 @@
       </div>
       <div xml:id="revisionlog" type="inform">
         <head>Revision Log</head>
-        <p xml:id="changelog-since-20130521">The following log records major changes that have been made to this document since the <ref target="http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/WD-its20-20130521/">ITS 2.0 Working Draft 21 May 2013</ref>.</p>
+        <p xml:id="changelog-since-20130521">The following log records major changes that have been made to this document since the <ref target="http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/WD-its20-20130521/">ITS 2.0 Working Draft 21 May 2013</ref>:</p>
         <list type="ordered">
           <item>Updated all text of the <ref target="#html5-withintext-handling">HTML5 defaults for Element Within Text</ref> and added example.
             See <ref target="https://www.w3.org/International/multilingualweb/lt/track/issues/118">issue-118</ref>
@@ -5975,7 +5980,7 @@
           <item>Fixes about <ptr target="#rfc2119" type="bibref"/> statements, see <ref target="https://www.w3.org/International/multilingualweb/lt/track/actions/540">action-540</ref>.</item>
           <item>Various checks: spelling (using U.S. English), style, and grammar.</item>
         </list>
-        <p xml:id="changelog-since-20130411">The following log records major changes that have been made to this document since the <ref target="http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/WD-its20-20130411/">ITS 2.0 Working Draft 11 April 2013</ref>.</p>
+        <p xml:id="changelog-since-20130411">The following log records major changes that have been made to this document since the <ref target="http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/WD-its20-20130411/">ITS 2.0 Working Draft 11 April 2013</ref>:</p>
         <list type="ordered">
           <item>Added a reference to the <ref target="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its/rdf#">ITS RDF Ontology</ref> and an <ref target="#its-rdf-ontology-status">explanatory note</ref> about its status to <ptr target="#conversion-to-nif" type="specref"/>, see <ref target="https://www.w3.org/International/multilingualweb/lt/track/actions/514">action-514</ref>.</item>
           <item>Updated <ptr target="#conversion-to-nif" type="specref"/> to reflect <ref target="http://www.w3.org/2013/05/08-mlw-lt-minutes#item04">MLW-LT May 2013 f2f discussion</ref>: <code>nif:occursIn</code> has changed to <code>nif:sourceUrl</code>, and <code>nif:convertedFrom</code> replaces <code>itsrdf:xpath2nif</code>. See <ref target="https://www.w3.org/International/multilingualweb/lt/track/actions/517">action-517</ref>.</item>
@@ -5997,7 +6002,7 @@
         </list>
         <p xml:id="changelog-since-20121206">The following log records major changes that have been
           made to this document since the <ref target="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-its20-20121206/"
-            >ITS 2.0 Working Draft 6 December 2012</ref>.</p>
+            >ITS 2.0 Working Draft 6 December 2012</ref>:</p>
         <list type="ordered">
           <item>Changed usage of <code>quote</code> element in example <ptr target="#EX-dir-html5-local-1" type="exref"/>, see <ref target="https://www.w3.org/International/multilingualweb/lt/track/issues/88">issue-88</ref> </item>
           <item>Added optional version attribute to standoff elements, see <ref
@@ -6160,7 +6165,7 @@
         </list>
         <p xml:id="changelog-since-20121023">The following log records major changes that have been
           made to this document since the <ref target="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-its20-20121023/"
-            >ITS 2.0 Working Draft 23 October 2012</ref>.</p>
+            >ITS 2.0 Working Draft 23 October 2012</ref>:</p>
         <list type="ordered">
           <item>Clarified usage of <ref target="#domain">Domain</ref> data category in HTML in
             response to <ref
@@ -6313,7 +6318,7 @@
         </list>
         <p xml:id="changelog-since-20120829">The following log records major changes that have been
           made to this document since the <ref target="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-its20-20120829/"
-            >ITS 2.0 Working Draft 29 August 2012</ref>.</p>
+            >ITS 2.0 Working Draft 29 August 2012</ref>:</p>
         <list type="ordered">
           <item>Added a first draft of <ptr target="#provenance" type="specref"/></item>
           <item>Added <ptr type="specref" target="#html5-markup"/>.</item>
@@ -6359,7 +6364,7 @@
         </list>
         <p xml:id="changelog-since-20120731">The following log records major changes that have been
           made to this document since the <ref target="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-its20-20120731/"
-            >ITS 2.0 Working Draft 31 July 2012</ref>.</p>
+            >ITS 2.0 Working Draft 31 July 2012</ref>:</p>
         <list type="ordered">
           <item>Added Disambiguation data category.</item>
           <item>Added <ptr target="#preservespace" type="specref"/>.</item>
@@ -6383,7 +6388,7 @@
         </list>
         <p xml:id="changelog-since-20120626">The following log records major changes that have been
           made to this document since the <ref target="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-its20-20120626/"
-            >ITS 2.0 Working Draft 26 June 2012</ref>.</p>
+            >ITS 2.0 Working Draft 26 June 2012</ref>:</p>
         <list type="ordered">
           <item>Various editorial changes (non-normative references update, style &amp; grammar
             fixes).</item>
@@ -6404,7 +6409,7 @@
         <p xml:id="changelog-since-20070403">The following log records major changes that have been
           made to this document between the <ref
             target="http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-its-20070403/">ITS 1.0 Recommendation</ref> and
-          this document.</p>
+          this document:</p>
         <list type="ordered">
           <item>Clarified <ref target="#introduction">introduction</ref> to cover ITS 2.0</item>
           <item>Added a subsection on the relation to ITS 1.0 to the introduction.</item>

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