sanity check

Hello,

a few random thoughts;

* any comments with respect to microxml and the following ?
   http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/REC-exi-20110310/
   http://www.w3.org/TR/unicode-xml

* in '5 Security Considerations' we assume that XML Canonization is a
security issue only, we may want to separate this out, pointing out
the various links to http://www.w3.org/TR/xml-c14n11/ . Worried that
this important information is being buried here.

* I think the '1. Introduction' is far too verbose and could do with
stating very clearly the differences in non normative terms with XML
1.0 right up front or perhaps just a link to B.1 Syntax is all that is
needed.

 J

Received on Tuesday, 2 October 2012 06:19:18 UTC