- From: Silvia Pfeiffer <silviapfeiffer1@gmail.com>
- Date: Mon, 13 Apr 2009 16:57:46 +1000
- To: Raphaël Troncy <Raphael.Troncy@cwi.nl>
- Cc: Media Fragment <public-media-fragment@w3.org>
Feedback from my changes... 2009/4/7 Raphaël Troncy <Raphael.Troncy@cwi.nl>: > I do have some comments on the chapters you have edited: > - Could we use something else than <eg> for the scenarios? The problem is > that <eg> forces the text to appear on a single line and we have now to > scroll horizontally the bar to get the whole scenario. Can you fix that? Done (I think you did it for me - thanks!). > - It seems to me that the first requirements from the scenarios are the > four dimensions we are considering. Consequently, could we switch the > sections 4 and 5, and first talk about the 4 dimensions, and then introduce > these additional requirements. Done as discussed in last meeting (thanks to you again :). > - Do we really want sub-section headings for the current section 4? Or > could we live with a more structured list? Again, I'm looking for formatting > that would improve the readability of the document. Left them there for easier referencing. > - The section 5.5 is the most critical for me, since I believe the reader > will *not* understand the fitness table! My suggestion is: > . emphasize the definition of 'fit', 'conditional' and 'unfit', using the > <definition> element? Done. > . replace the number in the table with these labels Done. > . further structure the table by adding some headings, such as: video > format, audio formats, image formats Done. Cheers, Silvia.
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