[Bug 22229] Editorial input

https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=22229

--- Comment #1 from Stefan Hakansson LK <stefan.lk.hakansson@ericsson.com> ---
(In reply to comment #0)
> Some minor stuff (I think it is mostly editorial):
> 
> Section 3, sub section "constraints", towards the end, it is said "but
> ignored by the application"; should it not be "but ignored by the UA"?
> 
> Section 4.1, the last four blocks of text before the figure: There is a lot
> of into about MediaStreamTrack's here; I think it should be moved to section
> 4.3.
> 
> Section 4.2: It is said that "The list of MediaStream consumers currently
> includes the media elements and the PeerConnection API specified in
> [WEBRTC10].". I think we should mention MediaStream Recorder and MediaStream
> Image Capture as well.
> 
> Section 4.2, right before the IDL: There is some reference and talking about
> stop() method for MediaStream, but we don't have that any more.
> 
> Section 4.3, it is said taht "Note that a web application can revoke all
> given permissions with MediaStreamTrack.stop().". I think it should be
> clarified that doing .stop() on _any_ of the MediaStreamTracks served by the
> source would revoke the permissions.

Separate bug filed for the above ("MediaStreamTrack.stop()"):
https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=22272

> 
> Section 4.3.1: There is a missing ")" in the text about what happens when a
> track ends. And I don't understand the part of the reference count.
> 
> Example 2: "stream.stop();" - no stop method on MediaStream any more.

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Received on Wednesday, 5 June 2013 10:27:19 UTC