Re: ACTION ALL to review the Ontology spec before 2nd Last CAll

Hi Thierry,

Here are some edits:
1.  Section 5.2.2.14 "QuickTime" and Section 5.2.3.3. "mov" should be combined into single section.  This section should be titled "QuickTime" not "mov".  Both sections have an entry for description in the table, and they conflict.  The entry for description from Section 5.2.2.14 should be used.  Since QuickTime is listed as a Container Format in Section 1.1, the combined section should be listed in the container format section, under 5.2.3.  I've attached a spreadsheet with all the entries for the QuickTime table.   We found several errors in reviewing the entries under 5.2.3.3 that have been corrected in this spreadsheet/

2.   In Section 5.2.3.4 "mp4" an entry for copyright should be included, as copyright metadata is defined in MP4:
Rights
copyright	exact	Copyright statement for the movie file content.	box type: cprt 
container: User Data Box 'udta'
value:  notice	A UTF-8 or UTF-16 string. Can have multiple values with different language and country code designations.	N/A
3.  In Section 6.5, Language is mispelled in the title.

4.  Under Appendix A, for the QuickTime specification, the date is listed as September 2007.  This specification was last updated in August 2010.  



On Feb 3, 2011, at 12:55 AM, Thierry MICHEL wrote:

> Hi all,
> 
> Please review carefully the Ontology draft
> http://dev.w3.org/2008/video/mediaann/mediaont-1.0/mediaont-1.0.html
> 
> 
> This will be the *last chance* for edits before going to 2nd  Last Call.
> 
> During the next MAWG telecon, the group will take the decision to move to 2nd  Last Call.
> 
> Please report to the mailing list your feedback.
> 
> Thierry.
> 


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