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Re: ACTION ALL to review the Ontology spec before 2nd Last CAll

From: Mari Carmen Suárez de Figueroa Baonza <mcsuarez@fi.upm.es>
Date: Fri, 04 Feb 2011 14:53:25 +0100
Message-ID: <4D4C04D5.1000906@fi.upm.es>
To: tmichel@w3.org
CC: "public-media-annotation@w3.org" <public-media-annotation@w3.org>
Dear Thierry, and all,

    here you can find my comments.

abstract
    - a core set of descriptive properties: this document defines --> "a 
core set of descriptive properties. This document defines"

introduction
    - in the following "properties of our Ontology was selected", 'our 
ontology' should be changed for 'Ontology for Media Resources 1.0'

terminology
    - "Ontology definition":  are not limited to using RDF: 
implementations MAY use --> are not limited to using RDF. 
Implementations MAY use
    - "Media resource definition": is any physical or logical Resource 
that can be --> is any physical or logical resource that can be

acknowledgement
    - member list should be updated (maybe including also my name, if 
you consider it logic :-)).

General: (across the document)
    - The use of 'version 1.0' and '1.0' with respect to the Ontology 
for Media Resources should be unified along the text, because sometimes 
is used in the first form and other times in the latter one.
    - Some times ontology appears in lower case and other times starting 
with capital letter (e.g., second and third paragraph of the 
introduction), this should be unified (to be used always the same form).
    - It should be clarify explicitly that "Media Ontology" and 
"Ontology for Media Resources" are synonyms
    - Different types of letters are used (e.g. for urls, see section 
7.1). This should be unified.

Best Regards,

       Mari Carmen.

Thierry MICHEL escribió:
> Hi all,
>
> Please review carefully the Ontology draft
> http://dev.w3.org/2008/video/mediaann/mediaont-1.0/mediaont-1.0.html
>
>
> This will be the *last chance* for edits before going to 2nd  Last Call.
>
> During the next MAWG telecon, the group will take the decision to move 
> to 2nd  Last Call.
>
> Please report to the mailing list your feedback.
>
> Thierry.
>
>

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