Hi, I reviewed the http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/Benefits#Benefits_of_the_Linked_Data_approach
and I agree with its content.
I'm just adding some notes as my 1 eurocent contribution.

- IMHO among the Benefits to Researchers, Students and Patrons (that  is, the users) we could mention the interdisciplinarity, as LD approach allows enriching knowledge through linking among several domain specific knowledge bases.

- There is a little overlap between the second paragaph of "Benefits to Organizations" (Today's library technology is specific to library data formats) and the paragraph "Benefits to Developers" ("Developers will also no longer have to work with library-specific data formats").
However, emphasizing the advantages of not being tied to the library-specific data formats is worthwhile. I would just suggest to make explicit reference from one paragraph to the other.

Best
oreste

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