Re: Review of the Recommendations Section

Thanks a lot, Kai!
These detailed comments, will I think be very useful to the team of editors of that section. Especially re. the introductory/scope issue...

Cheers,

Antoine


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> I was asked for a review for the section on recommendations. Like Felix, I added my comments as change diffs in the attached PDF.
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Received on Sunday, 26 June 2011 11:29:01 UTC