- From: iri issue tracker <trac+iri@trac.tools.ietf.org>
- Date: Thu, 01 Mar 2012 11:13:49 -0000
- To: draft-ietf-iri-3987bis@tools.ietf.org, duerst@it.aoyama.ac.jp
- Cc: public-iri@w3.org
#110: Format/wording changes for Additional Considerations (3.4.3)
Because we have introduced helpful subsubsection headings, we now have a
subsubsection that only contains two Notes. The Notes were used to
indicate that these are additional considerations; this is now expressed
by the subsubsection title.
The following patch does this and also changes a 'may' to 'can'.
{{{
--- C:/Users/duerst/AppData/Local/Temp/draft-ietf-iri-3987bis.xml-
revBASE.svn000.tmp.xml 木 3 1 19:10:21 2012
+++ C:/Data/ietf-iri/draft-ietf-iri-3987bis/draft-ietf-iri-3987bis.xml 木
3 1 20:11:07 2012
@@ -694,8 +694,7 @@
</section> <!-- punicode -->
<section title="Additional Considerations">
-<t><list style="hanging">
-<t hangText="Note:">Domain Names may appear in parts of an IRI other
+<t>Domain Names can appear in parts of an IRI other
than the ireg-name part. It is the responsibility of scheme-specific
implementations (if the Internationalized Domain Name is part of the
scheme syntax) or of server-side implementations (if the
@@ -709,7 +708,7 @@
The server-side implementation is responsible for making the
necessary conversions to be able to retrieve the Web page.</t>
-<t hangText="Note:">In this process, characters allowed in URI
+<t>In this process, characters allowed in URI
references and existing percent-encoded sequences are not encoded
further.
(This mapping is similar to, but different from, the encoding applied
when arbitrary content is included in some part of a URI.)
@@ -720,8 +719,6 @@
<vspace/>"http://www.example.org/red%09ros%C3%A9#red", not to
something like
<vspace/>"http%3A%2F%2Fwww.example.org%2Fred%2509ros%C3%A9%23red".</t>
-
-</list></t>
</section> <!-- additional -->
</section> <!-- dnsmapping -->
}}}
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Reporter: duerst@… | Owner: draft-ietf-iri-3987bis@…
Type: defect | Status: new
Priority: major | Milestone:
Component: 3987bis | Version:
Severity: - | Keywords:
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Ticket URL: <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/iri/trac/ticket/110>
iri <http://tools.ietf.org/wg/iri/>
Received on Thursday, 1 March 2012 11:14:29 UTC