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Re: Comments on the requirements document

From: Takao Suzuki <takaos@microsoft.com>
Date: Tue, 3 Feb 2004 13:31:21 -0800
Message-ID: <01fc01c3ea9d$137d7520$d628379d@redmond.corp.microsoft.com>
To: <aphillips@webmethods.com>, "I18n WSTF" <public-i18n-ws@w3.org>

Please feel free to edit "my English" as you wish. Any alteration is
welcome.

However, I am still not fully convinced the document is clearly stating the
purpose of the doc even with your further edit.  Can we add "must be
addressed by whom"?  Will that be the people who work on the core standards,
or just ourselves as i18n TF, or someone else?

-takao

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Addison Phillips [wM]" <aphillips@webmethods.com>
To: "Takao Suzuki" <takaos@microsoft.com>; "I18n WSTF"
<public-i18n-ws@w3.org>
Sent: Tuesday, February 03, 2004 1:12 PM
Subject: RE: Comments on the requirements document


> Hi Takao,
>
> Let me start with number 2: how about "Multi-lingual Service Discovery"
> (full stop)?
>
> For the first one, I agree that the Introduction doesn't convey the
document
> purpose as well as it could. How about me adding this (slightly altered)
> version of your text:
>
> "This document describes requirements to address internationalization
> issues. The Web Services Task Force feels that these requirements must be
> addressed in order to internationalize Web services technologies."
>
> Addison P. Phillips
> Director, Globalization Architecture
> webMethods | Delivering Global Business Visibility
> http://www.webMethods.com
> Chair, W3C Internationalization (I18N) Working Group
> Chair, W3C-I18N-WG, Web Services Task Force
> http://www.w3.org/International
>
> Internationalization is an architecture.
> It is not a feature.
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: public-i18n-ws-request@w3.org
> > [mailto:public-i18n-ws-request@w3.org]On Behalf Of Takao Suzuki
> > Sent: mardi 3 fevrier 2004 10:54
> > To: I18n WSTF
> > Subject: Comments on the requirements document
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > 1. Introduction
> >
> > I am afraid I don't clearly understand the purpose of this document from
> > the introduction section. Can we add a sentence like the following
> > before the 3rd paragraph?
> >
> > "This document is intended to describe the requirements to address these
> > internationalization issues, and these requirements must be met in order
> > to successfully develop internationalized Web Services Standards."
> >
> > If this is out of context, perhaps I don't fully understand the last
> > sentence of the second paragraph of "Status of this Document", saying
> > "We intend to use these requirements as input for the next phase of our
> > work".
> >
> > 2.6. R006 Multi-Lingual Service Discovery Requirements
> >
> > The title of this section doesn't seem to fit well because its parent
> > title says "Requirements".  How about we change this to "R006
> > Multi-Lingual Service Discoverability"?
> >
> > Sorry again if this is too out of context. I just want to make sure I
> > fully understand.
> >
> > -takao
>
>
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