RE: Edits done - section 4

> I also edited the whole of section 4.
>
> Change marks in place.  Please review.
> http://www.w3.org/International/its/techniques/its-techniques.html


> In example 32:
> [Ed. note: Given that the translate setting is inherited, I think 
> the example should read selector="//text " rather than 
> selector="//text/*", right?]

Yes. I'll make the change.


The changed looked fine to me.
But triple-checking would be good.

-ys