http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3287 ------- Comment #3 from karl@w3.org 2006-07-24 01:26 ------- I guess this is the last version? http://www.w3.org/International/its/itstagset/itstagset.html#introduction Yes my concerns are addressed except one. Do not start both in abstract and introduction with "this document". It's a common mistake from W3C editors, we already know that it's about this document ;) look at my example when I had started to rewrite the intro. :) for the rest thanks.Received on Monday, 24 July 2006 01:26:44 GMT
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