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From: Phillips, Addison <addison@amazon.com>
Date: Wed, 19 Nov 2008 14:41:59 -0800
To: Richard Ishida <ishida@w3.org>
CC: "public-i18n-core@w3.org" <public-i18n-core@w3.org>
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Hi Richard,

First off, excellent work!! Thank you for preparing this document.

A few very minor comments follow:

1. The title can't seem to decide if it is titlecase or not. In particular, the "Left-to-right" looks quite odd.

2. This sentence in the intro is a runon:

f you have struggled with this or have yet to start, this tutorial should help you adopt the best approach to marking up your content, and explain enough of how the bidirectional algorithm works that you will understand much better the root causes of most of your problems.

3. I concur with Felix's comment on "ISO script tag", except that you should really use the term 'subtag' such as: "Even if a script subtag is used in the language attribute value, this..."

Addison

Addison Phillips
Globalization Architect -- Lab126

Internationalization is not a feature.
It is an architecture.


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