Rephrasing of Document Character Set article

Hi Martin, others,

In our article FAQ: Document character set (http://www.w3.org/International/questions/qa-doc-charset) we have a key sentence that says:

"This means that the logical model describing how XML and HTML are processed is described in terms of the Unicode character set."

A German translator just suggested that we work on making that clearer, and I tend to agree that it might help.  I thought of a minimal rewording as follows:

"This means that when XML and HTML are processed, they use a model that describes characters in terms of the Unicode character set."

I'd welcome any further suggestions for improvement.

Cheers,
RI

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Richard Ishida
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W3C (World Wide Web Consortium)
 
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Received on Monday, 9 June 2008 14:21:29 UTC