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eliot: Two small changes to satisfy tweaks per bug 12062

From: poot <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Thu, 03 Mar 2011 13:36:15 -0500
To: public-html-diffs@w3.org
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eliot: Two small changes to satisfy tweaks per bug 12062

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/html-xhtml-author-guide/html-xhtml-authoring-guide.html?r1=1.59&r2=1.60&f=h

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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/html-xhtml-author-guide/html-xhtml-authoring-guide.html,v
retrieving revision 1.59
retrieving revision 1.60
diff -u -d -r1.59 -r1.60
--- html-xhtml-authoring-guide.html	2 Mar 2011 18:30:07 -0000	1.59
+++ html-xhtml-authoring-guide.html	3 Mar 2011 18:34:05 -0000	1.60
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 			<a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img height="48" width="72" alt="W3C" src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home"/></a>
 		</p>
 		<h1 class="title" id="title">Polyglot Markup: HTML-Compatible XHTML Documents</h1>
-		<h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-05-january-2011">W3C Editor's Draft 2 March 2011</h2>
+		<h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-05-january-2011">W3C Editor's Draft 3 March 2011</h2>
 		<dl>
 			<dt>This version:</dt>
 			<dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/html-xhtml-author-guide/html-xhtml-authoring-guide.html">http://dev.w3.org/html5/html-xhtml-author-guide/html-xhtml-authoring-guide.html</a></dd>
@@ -249,12 +249,12 @@
 	</p>
 	<p>
 		<a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-polyglot-markup" title="polyglot markup">Polyglot markup</a> declares character encoding in the following ways, which may be used separately or in combination 
-		(If used in combination, each approach contains identical encoding information):
+		(if used in combination, each approach contains identical encoding information):
 		</p><ul>
 			<li>Within the document</li>
 				<ul>
-					<li>By using the BOM.</li>
-					<li>By relying on the default XML UTF-8 encoding in combination with the use of the <code>&lt;meta charset="UTF-8"/&gt;</code> element.</li>
+					<li>By using the BOM of the specific encoding.</li>
+					<li>By relying on UTF-8 as the encoding default of XML, used in combination with the HTML <code>&lt;meta charset="UTF-8"/&gt;</code> element.</li>
 				</ul>
 			<li>In the HTTP header of the response [<cite><a href="#bib-HTTP11" rel="biblioentry" class="bibref">HTTP11</a></cite>], as in the following:
 				<p>
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