hixie: some editorial improvements to 'the indicated part...' (whatwg r4627)

hixie: some editorial improvements to 'the indicated part...' (whatwg
r4627)

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/spec/Overview.html?r1=1.3687&r2=1.3688&f=h
http://html5.org/tools/web-apps-tracker?from=4626&to=4627

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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.3687
retrieving revision 1.3688
diff -u -d -r1.3687 -r1.3688
--- Overview.html 24 Jan 2010 11:34:36 -0000 1.3687
+++ Overview.html 27 Jan 2010 01:49:19 -0000 1.3688
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@
    <h1>HTML5</h1>
    <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="a-vocabulary-and-associated-apis-for-html-and-xhtml">A vocabulary and associated APIs for HTML and XHTML</h2>
 
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="editor-s-draft-24-january-2010">Editor's Draft 24 January 2010</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="editor-s-draft-27-january-2010">Editor's Draft 27 January 2010</h2>
    <dl><dt>Latest Published Version:</dt>
     <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/html5/">http://www.w3.org/TR/html5/</a></dd>
     <dt>Latest Editor's Draft:</dt>
@@ -361,7 +361,7 @@
   specification's progress along the W3C Recommendation
   track.
 
-  This specification is the 24 January 2010 Editor's Draft.
+  This specification is the 27 January 2010 Editor's Draft.
   </p><!-- UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES IS THE PRECEDING PARAGRAPH TO BE REMOVED OR EDITED WITHOUT TALKING TO IAN FIRST --><!-- relationship to other work (required) --><p>This specification is part of <a href="http://www.whatwg.org/specs/web-apps/current-work/multipage/">a
   larger specification</a> being produced by the <a href="http://www.whatwg.org/">WHATWG</a>.
   <!-- UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES IS THE FOLLOWING PARAGRAPH TO BE REMOVED OR EDITED WITHOUT TALKING TO IAN FIRST -->
@@ -44629,7 +44629,7 @@
   defined by the specification that defines the <a href="#mime-type">MIME type</a>
   used by the <code>Document</code> (for example, the processing of
   fragment identifiers for <a href="#xml-mime-type" title="XML MIME type">XML MIME
-  types</a> is the responsibility of RFC3023).</p>
+  types</a> is the responsibility of RFC3023). <a href="#refsRFC3023">[RFC3023]</a></p>
 
   <p>For HTML documents (and <a href="#html-mime-type" title="HTML MIME type">HTML MIME
   types</a>), the following processing model must be followed to
@@ -44641,8 +44641,9 @@
    URL.</li><!-- parsing can't fail, since we checked earlier on
    when navigating -->
 
-   <li><p>If <var title="">fragid</var> is the empty string, then the
-   indicated part of the document is the top of the document.</li>
+   <li><p>If <var title="">fragid</var> is the empty string, then
+   <a href="#the-indicated-part-of-the-document">the indicated part of the document</a> is the top of the
+   document.</li>
 
    <li><p>Let <var title="">decoded fragid</var> be the result of
    expanding any sequences of percent-encoded octets in <var title="">fragid</var> that are valid UTF-8 sequences into Unicode
@@ -44662,8 +44663,8 @@
    order is <a href="#the-indicated-part-of-the-document">the indicated part of the document</a>; stop the
    algorithm here.</li>
 
-   <li><p>Otherwise, there is no indicated part of the
-   document.</li>
+   <li><p>Otherwise, there is no <a href="#the-indicated-part-of-the-document" title="the indicated part of
+   the document">indicated part of the document</a>.</li>
 
   </ol><p>For the purposes of the interaction of HTML with Selectors' <code title="selector-target">:target</code> pseudo-class, the
   <dfn id="target-element"><i>target element</i></dfn> is <a href="#the-indicated-part-of-the-document">the indicated part of the

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