mike: various editorial tweaks

mike: various editorial tweaks

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/markup/spec.html?r1=1.298&r2=1.299&f=h

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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/style.css,v
retrieving revision 1.143
retrieving revision 1.144
diff -u -d -r1.143 -r1.144
--- style.css 19 Oct 2010 17:38:04 -0000 1.143
+++ style.css 13 Dec 2010 08:58:40 -0000 1.144
@@ -114,6 +114,7 @@
   margin-top: 0px;
 }
 #form .attr-content-models,
+#select .attr-content-models,
 #input\.email .attr-content-models,
 #object .attr-content-models,
 #textarea .attr-content-models,

Index: s.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/s.html,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -d -r1.4 -r1.5
--- s.html 13 Dec 2010 08:06:41 -0000 1.4
+++ s.html 13 Dec 2010 08:58:39 -0000 1.5
@@ -25,7 +25,8 @@
       <div id="s-longdesc" class="longdesc">
     <p>The
     <span class="element">s</span>
-    element represents a span of struck text.</p>
+    element represents contents that are no longer accurate or no longer
+    relevant and that therefore has been &#8220;struck&#8221; from the document.</p>
   </div>
       <div class="no-number no-toc" id="s-content-model">
         <h2 class="element-subhead">Permitted contents <a class="hash" href="#s-content-model">#</a>
@@ -77,8 +78,7 @@
     <span class="element">s</span>
     element only in presentational terms, the element has now been given
     the specific semantic purpose of representing contents that are no
-    longer accurate or no longer relevant and that therefore has been
-    &#8220;struck&#8221; from the document.</p>
+    longer accurate or no longer relevant.</p>
   </div>
 </div>
 <div class="no-number no-toc interface" id="s-interface">

Index: spec.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/spec.html,v
retrieving revision 1.298
retrieving revision 1.299
diff -u -d -r1.298 -r1.299
--- spec.html 13 Dec 2010 08:06:41 -0000 1.298
+++ spec.html 13 Dec 2010 08:58:39 -0000 1.299
@@ -20851,7 +20851,8 @@
       <div id="s-longdesc" class="longdesc">
     <p>The
     <span class="element">s</span>
-    element represents a span of struck text.</p>
+    element represents contents that are no longer accurate or no longer
+    relevant and that therefore has been &#8220;struck&#8221; from the document.</p>
   </div>
       <div class="no-number no-toc" id="s-content-model">
         <h2 class="element-subhead">Permitted contents <a class="hash" href="#s-content-model">#</a>
@@ -20903,8 +20904,7 @@
     <span class="element">s</span>
     element only in presentational terms, the element has now been given
     the specific semantic purpose of representing contents that are no
-    longer accurate or no longer relevant and that therefore has been
-    &#8220;struck&#8221; from the document.</p>
+    longer accurate or no longer relevant.</p>
   </div>
 </div>
 <div class="no-number no-toc interface" id="s-interface">
@@ -24036,7 +24036,7 @@
     </span> 
 <a class="hash" href="#video.attrs.audio">#</a>
 </dt>
-            <dd>Represents the default state of audio channel of the video,
+            <dd>Represents default states of the audio channel of the video,
       potentially overriding user preferences.</dd>
 <dd>If any
         values are given in the
@@ -24045,8 +24045,8 @@
         <ul>
 <li>
 <code>muted</code>: instructs the UA to override the
-          user&#8217;s preferences, if any, and always default the video
-          to muted</li>
+          user&#8217;s preferences, if any, and always default the initial audio
+          mutedness state to muted</li>
         </ul>
 </dd>
           

Index: video.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/video.html,v
retrieving revision 1.102
retrieving revision 1.103
diff -u -d -r1.102 -r1.103
--- video.html 13 Dec 2010 08:06:42 -0000 1.102
+++ video.html 13 Dec 2010 08:58:40 -0000 1.103
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@
     </span> 
 <a class="hash" href="video.html#video.attrs.audio">#</a>
 </dt>
-            <dd>Represents the default state of audio channel of the video,
+            <dd>Represents default states of the audio channel of the video,
       potentially overriding user preferences.</dd>
 <dd>If any
         values are given in the
@@ -178,8 +178,8 @@
         <ul>
 <li>
 <code>muted</code>: instructs the UA to override the
-          user&#8217;s preferences, if any, and always default the video
-          to muted</li>
+          user&#8217;s preferences, if any, and always default the initial audio
+          mutedness state to muted</li>
         </ul>
 </dd>

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