hixie: Editorial fixes: mis-xreffing, too many 'when's (whatwg r3995)

hixie: Editorial fixes: mis-xreffing, too many 'when's (whatwg r3995)

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/spec/Overview.html?r1=1.3156&r2=1.3157&f=h
http://html5.org/tools/web-apps-tracker?from=3994&to=3995

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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.3156
retrieving revision 1.3157
diff -u -d -r1.3156 -r1.3157
--- Overview.html 24 Sep 2009 23:07:09 -0000 1.3156
+++ Overview.html 24 Sep 2009 23:10:23 -0000 1.3157
@@ -21357,9 +21357,10 @@
   or its vertical dimension is zero) then the method must return the
   string "<code title="">data:,</code>". (This is the shortest <code title="">data:</code> URL; it represents the empty string in a <code title="">text/plain</code> resource.)</p>
 
-  <p>When the <code title="dom-canvas-toDataURL"><a href="#dom-canvas-todataurl">toDataURL(<var title="">type</var>)</a></code> method, when called with one <em>or
-  more</em> arguments, must return a <code title="">data:</code> URL
-  containing a representation of the image in the format given by <var title="">type</var>. The possible values are <a href="#mime-type" title="MIME
+  <p>When the <code title="dom-canvas-toDataURL"><a href="#dom-canvas-todataurl">toDataURL(<var title="">type</var>)</a></code> method is called with one <em>or
+  more</em> arguments, it must return a <code title="">data:</code>
+  URL containing a representation of the image in the format given by
+  <var title="">type</var>. The possible values are <a href="#mime-type" title="MIME
   type">MIME types</a> with no parameters, for example
   <code>image/png</code>, <code>image/jpeg</code>, or even maybe
   <code>image/svg+xml</code> if the implementation actually keeps
@@ -22091,11 +22092,11 @@
 
    <li>
 
-    <p>Let <span>x(<var title="">&omega;</var>)&nbsp;=&nbsp;(<var title="">x<sub>1</sub></var>-<var title="">x<sub>0</sub></var>)<var title="">&omega;</var>&nbsp;+&nbsp;<var title="">x<sub>0</sub></var></span></p>
+    <p>Let <span title="">x(<var title="">&omega;</var>)&nbsp;=&nbsp;(<var title="">x<sub>1</sub></var>-<var title="">x<sub>0</sub></var>)<var title="">&omega;</var>&nbsp;+&nbsp;<var title="">x<sub>0</sub></var></span></p>
 
-    <p>Let <span>y(<var title="">&omega;</var>)&nbsp;=&nbsp;(<var title="">y<sub>1</sub></var>-<var title="">y<sub>0</sub></var>)<var title="">&omega;</var>&nbsp;+&nbsp;<var title="">y<sub>0</sub></var></span></p>
+    <p>Let <span title="">y(<var title="">&omega;</var>)&nbsp;=&nbsp;(<var title="">y<sub>1</sub></var>-<var title="">y<sub>0</sub></var>)<var title="">&omega;</var>&nbsp;+&nbsp;<var title="">y<sub>0</sub></var></span></p>
 
-    <p>Let <span>r(<var title="">&omega;</var>)&nbsp;=&nbsp;(<var title="">r<sub>1</sub></var>-<var title="">r<sub>0</sub></var>)<var title="">&omega;</var>&nbsp;+&nbsp;<var title="">r<sub>0</sub></var></span></p>
+    <p>Let <span title="">r(<var title="">&omega;</var>)&nbsp;=&nbsp;(<var title="">r<sub>1</sub></var>-<var title="">r<sub>0</sub></var>)<var title="">&omega;</var>&nbsp;+&nbsp;<var title="">r<sub>0</sub></var></span></p>
 
     <p>Let the color at <var title="">&omega;</var> be the color at
     that position on the gradient (with the colors coming from the <a href="#interpolation">interpolation and extrapolation</a>
@@ -22103,11 +22104,10 @@
 
    </li>
 
-   <li><p>For all values of <var title="">&omega;</var> where
-   <span>r(<var title="">&omega;</var>)&nbsp;&gt;&nbsp;0</span>,
+   <li><p>For all values of <var title="">&omega;</var> where <span title="">r(<var title="">&omega;</var>)&nbsp;&gt;&nbsp;0</span>,
    starting with the value of <var title="">&omega;</var> nearest to
    positive infinity and ending with the value of <var title="">&omega;</var> nearest to negative infinity, draw the
-   circumference of the circle with radius <span>r(<var title="">&omega;</var>)</span> at position (<span>x(<var title="">&omega;</var>)</span>, <span>y(<var title="">&omega;</var>)</span>), with the color at <var title="">&omega;</var>, but only painting on the parts of the
+   circumference of the circle with radius <span title="">r(<var title="">&omega;</var>)</span> at position (<span title="">x(<var title="">&omega;</var>)</span>, <span title="">y(<var title="">&omega;</var>)</span>), with the color at <var title="">&omega;</var>, but only painting on the parts of the
    canvas that have not yet been painted on by earlier circles in this
    step for this rendering of the gradient.</li>

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