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mike: further streamlining of <meter> documentation

From: poot <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:51:55 +0900 (JST)
To: public-html-diffs@w3.org
Message-Id: <20090729075155.979802BC58@toro.w3.mag.keio.ac.jp>
mike: further streamlining of <meter> documentation

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/markup/spec.html?r1=1.65&r2=1.66&f=h

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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/progress.html,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -d -r1.11 -r1.12
--- progress.html	29 Jul 2009 07:19:23 -0000	1.11
+++ progress.html	29 Jul 2009 07:51:29 -0000	1.12
@@ -72,16 +72,6 @@
       </div>
       
       
-        <div class="no-number no-toc" id="progress-details">
-        <h2 class="element-subhead">Details <a class="hash" href="#progress-details">#</a></h2>
-    <p>The progress is either indeterminate, indicating that
-    progress is being made but that it is not clear how much more
-    work remains to be done before the task is complete (for
-    example, because the task is waiting for a remote host to
-    respond), or the progress is a number in the range zero to a
-    maximum, giving the fraction of work that has so far been
-    completed.</p>
-  </div>
       <div class="no-number no-toc" id="progress-context">
         <h2 class="element-subhead">Permitted contexts <a class="hash" href="#progress-context">#</a></h2>
         <ul>

Index: meter.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/meter.html,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -d -r1.12 -r1.13
--- meter.html	29 Jul 2009 07:42:42 -0000	1.12
+++ meter.html	29 Jul 2009 07:51:29 -0000	1.13
@@ -43,66 +43,35 @@
             <dt><a class="attribute-name" id="meter.attrs.value" title="meter.attrs.value" href="meter.html#meter.attrs.value">value</a><span class="attr-values"> = 
       <a class="ref" href="datatypes.html#common.data.float" title="common.data.float">float</a>
     </span> </dt>
-            <dd>Specifies the value to have the gauge indicate as the
-        &#8220;measured&#8221; value.</dd>
+            <dd>The &#8220;measured&#8221; value shown by meter.</dd>
           
             <dt><a class="attribute-name" id="meter.attrs.min" title="meter.attrs.min" href="meter.html#meter.attrs.min">min</a><span class="attr-values"> = 
       <a class="ref" href="datatypes.html#common.data.float" title="common.data.float">float</a>
     </span> </dt>
-            <dd>The lower bound of the range; the <code>max</code>
-        attribute specifies the upper bound. The
-        <code>value</code> attribute specifies the value to have
-        the gauge indicate as the &#8220;measured&#8221; value.</dd>
+            <dd>The lower bound of the range for the meter.</dd>
           
             <dt><a class="attribute-name" id="meter.attrs.low" title="meter.attrs.low" href="meter.html#meter.attrs.low">low</a><span class="attr-values"> = 
       <a class="ref" href="datatypes.html#common.data.float" title="common.data.float">float</a>
     </span> </dt>
-            <dd>The other three attributes can be used to segment the gauge's range into
-   "low", "medium", and "high" parts, and to indicate which part of the gauge
-   is the "optimum" part. The <code>low</code> attribute specifies the range
-   that is considered to be the "low" part, and the
-   <code>high</code> attribute specifies the
-   range that is considered to be the "high" part. The
-   <code>optimum</code> attribute
- gives the
-   position that is "optimum"; if that is higher than the "high" value then
-   this indicates that the higher the value, the better; if it's lower than
-   the "low" mark then it indicates that lower values are better, and
-   naturally if it is in between then it indicates that neither high nor low
-   values are good.</dd>
+            <dd>The point that marks the upper boundary of the &#8220;low&#8221;
+        segment of the meter.</dd>
           
             <dt><a class="attribute-name" id="meter.attrs.high" title="meter.attrs.high" href="meter.html#meter.attrs.high">high</a><span class="attr-values"> = 
       <a class="ref" href="datatypes.html#common.data.float" title="common.data.float">float</a>
     </span> </dt>
-            <dd>The other three attributes can be used to segment the gauge's range into
-   "low", "medium", and "high" parts, and to indicate which part of the gauge
-   is the "optimum" part. The <code>low</code> attribute specifies the range
-   that is considered to be the "low" part, and the <code>high</code> attribute specifies the
-   range that is considered to be the "high" part. The <code>optimum</code> attribute gives the
-   position that is "optimum"; if that is higher than the "high" value then
-   this indicates that the higher the value, the better; if it's lower than
-   the "low" mark then it indicates that lower values are better, and
-   naturally if it is in between then it indicates that neither high nor low
-   values are good.</dd>
+            <dd>The point that marks the lower boundary of the &#8220;high&#8221;
+        segment of the meter.</dd>
           
             <dt><a class="attribute-name" id="meter.attrs.max" title="meter.attrs.max" href="meter.html#meter.attrs.max">max</a><span class="attr-values"> = 
       <a class="ref" href="datatypes.html#common.data.float" title="common.data.float">float</a>
     </span> </dt>
-            <dd>Specifies the upper bound.</dd>
+            <dd>The upper bound of the range for the meter.</dd>
           
             <dt><a class="attribute-name" id="meter.attrs.optimum" title="meter.attrs.optimum" href="meter.html#meter.attrs.optimum">optimum</a><span class="attr-values"> = 
       <a class="ref" href="datatypes.html#common.data.float" title="common.data.float">float</a>
     </span> </dt>
-            <dd>The other three attributes can be used to segment the gauge's range into
-   "low", "medium", and "high" parts, and to indicate which part of the gauge
-   is the "optimum" part. The <code>low</code> attribute specifies the range
-   that is considered to be the "low" part, and the <code>high</code> attribute specifies the
-   range that is considered to be the "high" part. The <code>optimum</code> attribute gives the
-   position that is "optimum"; if that is higher than the "high" value then
-   this indicates that the higher the value, the better; if it's lower than
-   the "low" mark then it indicates that lower values are better, and
-   naturally if it is in between then it indicates that neither high nor low
-   values are good.</dd>
+            <dd>The point that marks the &#8220;optimum&#8221; position for the
+        meter.</dd>
           
         </dl></div>
       

Index: spec.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/spec.html,v
retrieving revision 1.65
retrieving revision 1.66
diff -u -d -r1.65 -r1.66
--- spec.html	29 Jul 2009 07:42:42 -0000	1.65
+++ spec.html	29 Jul 2009 07:51:29 -0000	1.66
@@ -10775,71 +10775,40 @@
 <a class="attribute-name" id="meter.attrs.value" title="meter.attrs.value" href="#meter.attrs.value">value</a><span class="attr-values"> = 
       <a class="ref" href="#common.data.float" title="common.data.float">float</a>
     </span> </dt>
-            <dd>Specifies the value to have the gauge indicate as the
-        &#8220;measured&#8221; value.</dd>
+            <dd>The &#8220;measured&#8221; value shown by meter.</dd>
           
             <dt>
 <a class="attribute-name" id="meter.attrs.min" title="meter.attrs.min" href="#meter.attrs.min">min</a><span class="attr-values"> = 
       <a class="ref" href="#common.data.float" title="common.data.float">float</a>
     </span> </dt>
-            <dd>The lower bound of the range; the <code>max</code>
-        attribute specifies the upper bound. The
-        <code>value</code> attribute specifies the value to have
-        the gauge indicate as the &#8220;measured&#8221; value.</dd>
+            <dd>The lower bound of the range for the meter.</dd>
           
             <dt>
 <a class="attribute-name" id="meter.attrs.low" title="meter.attrs.low" href="#meter.attrs.low">low</a><span class="attr-values"> = 
       <a class="ref" href="#common.data.float" title="common.data.float">float</a>
     </span> </dt>
-            <dd>The other three attributes can be used to segment the gauge's range into
-   "low", "medium", and "high" parts, and to indicate which part of the gauge
-   is the "optimum" part. The <code>low</code> attribute specifies the range
-   that is considered to be the "low" part, and the
-   <code>high</code> attribute specifies the
-   range that is considered to be the "high" part. The
-   <code>optimum</code> attribute
- gives the
-   position that is "optimum"; if that is higher than the "high" value then
-   this indicates that the higher the value, the better; if it's lower than
-   the "low" mark then it indicates that lower values are better, and
-   naturally if it is in between then it indicates that neither high nor low
-   values are good.</dd>
+            <dd>The point that marks the upper boundary of the &#8220;low&#8221;
+        segment of the meter.</dd>
           
             <dt>
 <a class="attribute-name" id="meter.attrs.high" title="meter.attrs.high" href="#meter.attrs.high">high</a><span class="attr-values"> = 
       <a class="ref" href="#common.data.float" title="common.data.float">float</a>
     </span> </dt>
-            <dd>The other three attributes can be used to segment the gauge's range into
-   "low", "medium", and "high" parts, and to indicate which part of the gauge
-   is the "optimum" part. The <code>low</code> attribute specifies the range
-   that is considered to be the "low" part, and the <code>high</code> attribute specifies the
-   range that is considered to be the "high" part. The <code>optimum</code> attribute gives the
-   position that is "optimum"; if that is higher than the "high" value then
-   this indicates that the higher the value, the better; if it's lower than
-   the "low" mark then it indicates that lower values are better, and
-   naturally if it is in between then it indicates that neither high nor low
-   values are good.</dd>
+            <dd>The point that marks the lower boundary of the &#8220;high&#8221;
+        segment of the meter.</dd>
           
             <dt>
 <a class="attribute-name" id="meter.attrs.max" title="meter.attrs.max" href="#meter.attrs.max">max</a><span class="attr-values"> = 
       <a class="ref" href="#common.data.float" title="common.data.float">float</a>
     </span> </dt>
-            <dd>Specifies the upper bound.</dd>
+            <dd>The upper bound of the range for the meter.</dd>
           
             <dt>
 <a class="attribute-name" id="meter.attrs.optimum" title="meter.attrs.optimum" href="#meter.attrs.optimum">optimum</a><span class="attr-values"> = 
       <a class="ref" href="#common.data.float" title="common.data.float">float</a>
     </span> </dt>
-            <dd>The other three attributes can be used to segment the gauge's range into
-   "low", "medium", and "high" parts, and to indicate which part of the gauge
-   is the "optimum" part. The <code>low</code> attribute specifies the range
-   that is considered to be the "low" part, and the <code>high</code> attribute specifies the
-   range that is considered to be the "high" part. The <code>optimum</code> attribute gives the
-   position that is "optimum"; if that is higher than the "high" value then
-   this indicates that the higher the value, the better; if it's lower than
-   the "low" mark then it indicates that lower values are better, and
-   naturally if it is in between then it indicates that neither high nor low
-   values are good.</dd>
+            <dd>The point that marks the &#8220;optimum&#8221; position for the
+        meter.</dd>
           
         </dl>
 </div>
@@ -11820,17 +11789,6 @@
       </div>
       
       
-        <div class="no-number no-toc" id="progress-details">
-        <h2 class="element-subhead">Details <a class="hash" href="#progress-details">#</a>
-</h2>
-    <p>The progress is either indeterminate, indicating that
-    progress is being made but that it is not clear how much more
-    work remains to be done before the task is complete (for
-    example, because the task is waiting for a remote host to
-    respond), or the progress is a number in the range zero to a
-    maximum, giving the fraction of work that has so far been
-    completed.</p>
-  </div>
       <div class="no-number no-toc" id="progress-context">
         <h2 class="element-subhead">Permitted contexts <a class="hash" href="#progress-context">#</a>
 </h2>
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