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hixie: Audience tweaks, and typo fixes. (whatwg r3397)

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Date: Tue, 14 Jul 2009 10:02:59 +0900 (JST)
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hixie: Audience tweaks, and typo fixes. (whatwg r3397)

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/spec/Overview.html?r1=1.2526&r2=1.2527&f=h
http://html5.org/tools/web-apps-tracker?from=3396&to=3397

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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.2526
retrieving revision 1.2527
diff -u -d -r1.2526 -r1.2527
--- Overview.html	13 Jul 2009 21:32:53 -0000	1.2526
+++ Overview.html	14 Jul 2009 01:01:33 -0000	1.2527
@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@
    <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="a-vocabulary-and-associated-apis-for-html-and-xhtml">A vocabulary and associated APIs for HTML and XHTML</h2>
    <!--ZZZ:-->
    <!--<h2 class="no-num no-toc">W3C Working Draft 23 April 2009</h2>-->
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="editor-s-draft-date-1-january-1970">Editor's Draft 13 July 2009</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="editor-s-draft-date-1-january-1970">Editor's Draft 14 July 2009</h2>
    <!--:ZZZ-->
    <dl><!-- ZZZ: update the month/day (twice), (un)comment out
     <dt>This Version:</dt>
@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@
   track.
   <!--ZZZ:-->
   <!--This specification is the 23 April 2009 Working Draft.-->
-  This specification is the 13 July 2009 Editor's Draft.
+  This specification is the 14 July 2009 Editor's Draft.
   <!--:ZZZ-->
   </p><!-- UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES IS THE PRECEDING PARAGRAPH TO BE REMOVED OR EDITED WITHOUT TALKING TO IAN FIRST --><!-- relationship to other work (required) --><p>This specification is also being produced by the <a href="http://www.whatwg.org/">WHATWG</a>. The two specifications are
   identical from the table of contents onwards.</p><!-- UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES IS THE FOLLOWING PARAGRAPH TO BE REMOVED OR EDITED WITHOUT TALKING TO IAN FIRST --><!-- UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES IS THE PRECEDING PARAGRAPH TO BE REMOVED OR EDITED WITHOUT TALKING TO IAN FIRST --><!-- context and rationale (required) --><p>This specification is intended to replace (be a new version of)
@@ -1181,18 +1181,18 @@
   vague subject referred to as Web Applications. This specification
   attempts to rectify this, while at the same time updating the HTML
   specifications to address issues raised in the past few years.<h3 id="audience"><span class="secno">1.2 </span>Audience</h3><p><i>This section is non-normative.</i><p>This specification is intended for authors of documents and
-  scripts that use the features defined in this specification<span class="impl">, and implementors of tools that are intended to
-  conform to this specification, and individuals wishing to establish
-  the correctness of documents or implementations with respect to the
-  requirements of this specification</span>.<p>This document is probably not suited to readers who do not
+  scripts that use the features defined in this specification<span class="impl">, implementors of tools that operate on pages that use
+  the features defined in this specification, and individuals wishing
+  to establish the correctness of documents or implementations with
+  respect to the requirements of this specification</span>.<p>This document is probably not suited to readers who do not
   already have at least a passing familiarity with Web technologies,
   as in places it sacrifices clarity for precision, and brevity for
   completeness. More approachable tutorials and authoring guides can
-  provide a gentler introduction to the topic.<p>In particular, readers should be familiar with the basics of DOM
-  Core and DOM Events before reading this specification. An
-  understanding of Web IDL, HTTP, XML, Unicode, character encodings,
-  JavaScript, and CSS will be helpful in places but is not
-  essential.<h3 id="scope"><span class="secno">1.3 </span>Scope</h3><p><i>This section is non-normative.</i><p>This specification is limited to providing a semantic-level
+  provide a gentler introduction to the topic.<p>In particular, familiarity with the basics of DOM Core and DOM
+  Events is necessary for a complete understanding of some of the more
+  technical parts of this specification. An understanding of Web IDL,
+  HTTP, XML, Unicode, character encodings, JavaScript, and CSS will
+  also be helpful in places but is not essential.<h3 id="scope"><span class="secno">1.3 </span>Scope</h3><p><i>This section is non-normative.</i><p>This specification is limited to providing a semantic-level
   markup language and associated semantic-level scripting APIs for
   authoring accessible pages on the Web ranging from static documents
   to dynamic applications.<p>The scope of this specification does not include providing
@@ -43879,7 +43879,7 @@
      <td> The manifest was a 404 or 410 page, so the attempt to cache the application has been aborted.
      <td rowspan="3"> Last event in sequence.
     <tr><td> The manifest hadn't changed, but the page referencing the manifest failed to download properly.
-    <tr><td> A fatal error occured while fetching the resources listed in the manifest.
+    <tr><td> A fatal error occurred while fetching the resources listed in the manifest.
     <tr><td> The manifest changed while the update was being run.
      <td> The user agent will try fetching the files again momentarily.
   </table><div class="impl">
@@ -65241,6 +65241,7 @@
   Darin Fisher,
   Dave Camp,
   Dave Hodder,
+  Dave Lampton,
   Dave Singer,
   Dave Townsend<!-- Mossop on moz irc -->,
   David Baron,
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