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From: Sam Ruby via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 25 Sep 2012 18:38:45 +0000
To: public-html-commits@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1TGa1t-000278-31@lionel-hutz.w3.org>
Update of /sources/public/html5/decision-policy
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	decision-policy-v3.html 
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More wordsmithing


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--- decision-policy-v3.html	25 Sep 2012 18:36:47 -0000	1.7
+++ decision-policy-v3.html	25 Sep 2012 18:38:43 -0000	1.8
@@ -75,7 +75,8 @@
 The Process by which the Working Group decides whether a specification that
 extends any HTML WG specification can be integrated into the original specification.</li>
 
-<li><a href="#cr-remove-early">13. Removing some at-risk features early in CR</a> - The Process by which the Working Group may drop certain at-risk features early in CR..</li>
+<li><a href="#cr-remove-early">13. Removing some at-risk features early in
+CR</a> - The Process by which the Working Group may remove certain at-risk features early in CR.</li>
 
 </ul>
 
@@ -916,7 +917,7 @@
 removals, probably are.</li>
 
 <li>During Candidate Recommendation, if anything beyond very minor technical
-changes are made, other than dropping features marked "at risk", then the WG
+changes are made, other than removing features marked "at risk", then the WG
 cannot proceed to Proposed Recommendation and must return to Working Draft
 status.</li>
 
@@ -1160,7 +1161,7 @@
 <dl>
 
 <dt>1. Marking as at risk</dt>
-<dd>To be eligible to be dropped early, the feature must be approved
+<dd>To be eligible to be removed early, the feature must be approved
 by the Working Group to be on the list of at-risk features prior to
 CR.</dd>
 
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