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From: Steven Faulkners via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Thu, 15 Dec 2011 13:19:00 +0000
To: public-html-commits@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1RbBDA-0003xv-Jg@lionel-hutz.w3.org>
Update of /sources/public/html5/alt-techniques
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv15223

Modified Files:
	Overview.html developer.html 
Log Message:
minor change to wording to correct grammar

Index: Overview.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/alt-techniques/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.85
retrieving revision 1.86
diff -u -d -r1.85 -r1.86
--- Overview.html	2 Dec 2011 17:10:20 -0000	1.85
+++ Overview.html	15 Dec 2011 13:18:58 -0000	1.86
@@ -675,7 +675,7 @@
 </style>
 </head>
 <body style="display: inherit;"><div class="head"><p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" alt="W3C" width="72" height="48"></a></p><h1 class="title" id="title">HTML5: Techniques for providing useful text alternatives</h1>
-<h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-26-may-2011">W3C Editor's Draft 02 December 2011</h2><dl><dt>This version:</dt><dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/">http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/</a></dd><dt>Latest published version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/html-alt-techniques/">http://www.w3.org/TR/html-alt-techniques/</a></dd><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/">http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/</a></dd>
+<h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-26-may-2011">W3C Editor's Draft 15 December 2011</h2><dl><dt>This version:</dt><dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/">http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/</a></dd><dt>Latest published version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/html-alt-techniques/">http://www.w3.org/TR/html-alt-techniques/</a></dd><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/">http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/</a></dd>
 
 <dt>Developer edition:</dt>
 <dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/developer.html">http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/developer.html</a> </dd>
@@ -722,7 +722,7 @@
     the page being read out by a  voice Web
     browser.</li>
   <li>They have images disabled to save on download costs.</li>
-  <li>    They have problems to load images or the source of image is wrong.  </li>
+  <li>    They have problems loading images or the source of an image is wrong.  </li>
 </ul>
 <h3 id="good-practices">General Text Alternative Good Practices</h3>
 <ul>

Index: developer.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/alt-techniques/developer.html,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -d -r1.9 -r1.10
--- developer.html	2 Dec 2011 17:10:20 -0000	1.9
+++ developer.html	15 Dec 2011 13:18:58 -0000	1.10
@@ -664,7 +664,7 @@
 </style>
 </head>
 <body style="display: inherit;"><div class="head"><p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" alt="W3C" width="72" height="48"></a></p><h1 class="title" id="title">HTML5: Techniques for providing useful text alternatives</h1>
-<h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-26-may-2011">W3C Editor's Draft 02 December 2011</h2><dl><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/">http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/</a></dd><dt>Editor:</dt><dd><span>Steve Faulkner</span>, The Paciello Group <span class="ed_mailto"><a href="mailto:sfaulkner@paciellogroup.com">sfaulkner@paciellogroup.com</a></span> </dd>
+<h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-26-may-2011">W3C Editor's Draft 15 December 2011</h2><dl><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/">http://dev.w3.org/html5/alt-techniques/</a></dd><dt>Editor:</dt><dd><span>Steve Faulkner</span>, The Paciello Group <span class="ed_mailto"><a href="mailto:sfaulkner@paciellogroup.com">sfaulkner@paciellogroup.com</a></span> </dd>
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@@ -710,7 +710,7 @@
     the page being read out by a  voice Web
     browser.</li>
   <li>They have images disabled to save on download costs.</li>
-  <li>    They have problems to load images or the source of image is wrong.  </li>
+  <li>    They have problems loading images or the source of an image is wrong.  </li>
 </ul>
 <h3 id="good-practices">General Text Alternative Good Practices</h3>
 <ul>
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