html5/markup/src syntax.html,1.75,1.76

Update of /sources/public/html5/markup/src
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv15271/src

Modified Files:
	syntax.html 
Log Message:
streamline the description of deprecated doctypes


Index: syntax.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/src/syntax.html,v
retrieving revision 1.75
retrieving revision 1.76
diff -u -d -r1.75 -r1.76
--- syntax.html	18 Feb 2010 20:39:19 -0000	1.75
+++ syntax.html	1 Mar 2010 11:58:48 -0000	1.76
@@ -98,56 +98,35 @@
     <dfn
       id="doctype-declaration"
       title="doctype-declaration"
-      >document type declaration</dfn>
+      >document type declaration</dfn>,
     as defined in the XML specification
     <a href="#refsXML">[XML]</a>,
-    with the further restriction that it must meet one of the
-    following sets of constraints:</p>
+    whose
+    <a href="#doctype-declaration">document type declaration’s</a>
+    name part is a
+    <a href="#case-insensitive">case-insensitive match</a>
+    for the string
+    "<code>HTML</code>",
+    and that must one of the following sets of constraints:</p>
     <ul>
-      <li>The
-      <a href="#doctype-declaration">document type declaration’s</a>
-      name part is a
-      <a href="#case-insensitive">case-insensitive match</a>
-      for the string
-      "<code>HTML</code>",
-      its public identifier is an exact match for the literal string
+      <li>its public identifier is an exact match for the literal string
       "<code>-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.0//EN</code>",
       and its system identifier is either missing or is an exact
       match for the literal string
-      "<code>http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40/strict.dtd</code>".</li>
-      <li>The
-      <a href="#doctype-declaration">document type declaration’s</a>
-      name part is a
-      <a href="#case-insensitive">case-insensitive match</a>
-      for the string
-      "<code>HTML</code>",
-      its public identifier is an exact match for the literal string
+      "<code>http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40/strict.dtd</code>"</li>
+      <li>its public identifier is an exact match for the literal string
       "<code>-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01//EN</code>",
       and its system identifier is either missing or is an exact
       match for the literal string
-      "<code>http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/strict.dtd</code>".</li>
-      <li>The
-      <a href="#doctype-declaration">document type declaration’s</a>
-      name part is a
-      <a href="#case-insensitive">case-insensitive match</a>
-      for the string
-      "<code>HTML</code>",
-      its public identifier is an exact match for the literal string
+      "<code>http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/strict.dtd</code>"</li>
+      <li>its public identifier is an exact match for the literal string
       "<code>-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Strict//EN</code>",
-      and its system identifier is either missing or is an exact
-      match for the literal string
-      "<code>http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-strict.dtd</code>".</li>
-      <li>The
-      <a href="#doctype-declaration">document type declaration’s</a>
-      name part is a
-      <a href="#case-insensitive">case-insensitive match</a>
-      for the string
-      "<code>HTML</code>",
-      its public identifier is an exact match for the literal string
+      and its system identifier is an exact match for the literal string
+      "<code>http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-strict.dtd</code>"</li>
+      <li>its public identifier is an exact match for the literal string
       "<code>-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.1//EN</code>",
-      and its system identifier is either missing or is an exact
-      match for the literal string
-      "<code>http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml11/DTD/xhtml11.dtd</code>".</li>
+      and its system identifier is an exact match for the literal string
+      "<code>http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml11/DTD/xhtml11.dtd</code>"</li>
     </ul>
     <div class="example">
     <p>The following are examples of some

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