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html5/spec Overview.html,1.3589,1.3590

From: Ian Hickson via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 05 Jan 2010 11:54:07 +0000
To: public-html-commits@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1NS7zD-00071n-Iq@lionel-hutz.w3.org>
Update of /sources/public/html5/spec
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv26977

Modified Files:
	Overview.html 
Log Message:
tweak the text to have the example stuff after 'for example'. (whatwg r4490)

Index: Overview.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.3589
retrieving revision 1.3590
diff -u -d -r1.3589 -r1.3590
--- Overview.html	5 Jan 2010 11:50:34 -0000	1.3589
+++ Overview.html	5 Jan 2010 11:54:04 -0000	1.3590
@@ -14314,9 +14314,9 @@
   time on a 24 hour clock, or a precise date in the proleptic
   Gregorian calendar, optionally with a time and a time-zone
   offset. <a href="#refsGREGORIAN">[GREGORIAN]</a><p>This element is intended as a way to encode modern dates and
-  times in a machine-readable way so that user agents can offer to add
-  them to the user's calendar. For example, adding birthday reminders
-  or scheduling events.</p><!-- it's also intended for restyling to local conventions
+  times in a machine-readable way so that, for example, user agents
+  can offer to add birthday reminders or scheduled events to the
+  user's calendar.</p><!-- it's also intended for restyling to local conventions
   (2000-12-31 vs 31-12-2000 vs 12-31-2000), but CSS doesn't support
   that yet. --><div class="note">
 
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