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From: Michael Smith via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 13 Dec 2010 08:58:42 +0000
To: public-html-commits@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1PS4F0-0008JA-KT@lionel-hutz.w3.org>
Update of /sources/public/html5/markup/elements
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv31795/elements

Modified Files:
	s.html video.html 
Log Message:
various editorial tweaks


Index: video.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/video.html,v
retrieving revision 1.15
retrieving revision 1.16
diff -u -d -r1.15 -r1.16
--- video.html	13 Dec 2010 08:06:43 -0000	1.15
+++ video.html	13 Dec 2010 08:58:40 -0000	1.16
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
     </dl>
     <dl>
       <dt id="video.attrs.audio">audio</dt>
-      <dd>Represents the default state of audio channel of the video,
+      <dd>Represents default states of the audio channel of the video,
       potentially overriding user preferences.</dd>
       <dd>If any
         values are given in the
@@ -83,8 +83,8 @@
         they instruct the UA to set default audio states, as follows:
         <ul>
           <li><code>muted</code>: instructs the UA to override the
-          user’s preferences, if any, and always default the video
-          to muted</li>
+          user’s preferences, if any, and always default the initial audio
+          mutedness state to muted</li>
         </ul>
       </dd>
     </dl>

Index: s.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/s.html,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -d -r1.6 -r1.7
--- s.html	30 Nov 2010 06:55:53 -0000	1.6
+++ s.html	13 Dec 2010 08:58:40 -0000	1.7
@@ -4,14 +4,14 @@
   <div id="longdesc">
     <p>The
     <span class="element">s</span>
-    element represents a span of struck text.</p>
+    element represents contents that are no longer accurate or no longer
+    relevant and that therefore has been “struck” from the document.</p>
   </div>
   <div id="changes">
     <p>Although previous versions of HTML defined the
     <span class="element">s</span>
     element only in presentational terms, the element has now been given
     the specific semantic purpose of representing contents that are no
-    longer accurate or no longer relevant and that therefore has been
-    “struck” from the document.</p>
+    longer accurate or no longer relevant.</p>
   </div>
 </div>
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