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From: Michael Smith via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Sun, 16 Aug 2009 15:46:30 +0000
To: public-html-commits@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1MchwE-0003GX-Qa@lionel-hutz.w3.org>
Update of /sources/public/html5/markup/elements
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv12172/elements

Modified Files:
	audio.html base.html bdo.html meta.name.html script.html 
	source.html style.html 
Log Message:
various wording changes


Index: base.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/base.html,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -d -r1.4 -r1.5
--- base.html	8 Jun 2009 00:53:37 -0000	1.4
+++ base.html	16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000	1.5
@@ -2,10 +2,11 @@
   <h4>The base element</h4>
   <div id="shortdesc">base URL</div>
   <div id="longdesc">
-    <p>The <a href="#base" class="element">base</a> element allows
-    authors to specify a document’s base URL for the purposes of
-    resolving relative URLs, and the name of the default browsing
-    context for the purposes of following hyperlinks.</p>
+    <p>The <a href="#base" class="element">base</a> element
+    specifies a document-wide base URL for the purposes of
+    resolving relative URLs, and document-wide default
+    <a href="#context">browsing context</a> name
+    for the purposes of following hyperlinks.</p>
   </div>
   <div id="attributes">
     <dl>
@@ -15,8 +16,7 @@
     <dl>
       <dt id="base.attrs.target">target</dt>
       <dd>A <a href="#context">browsing context</a> name or
-        keyword. UAs use this value when following
-        hyperlinks.</dd>
+        keyword for use in following hyperlinks.</dd>
     </dl>
   </div>
 </div>

Index: source.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/source.html,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -d -r1.8 -r1.9
--- source.html	2 Aug 2009 07:07:46 -0000	1.8
+++ source.html	16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000	1.9
@@ -2,10 +2,14 @@
   <h4>The source element</h4>
   <div id="shortdesc">media source</div>
   <div id="longdesc">
-    <p>The <a href="#source" class="element">source</a> element
-    allows authors to specify multiple
-    <a href="#media-source">media sources</a>
-    for media elements.</p>
+    <p>The
+    <a href="#source" class="element">source</a>
+    element
+    enables multiple <a href="#media-source">media sources</a> to
+    be specified for
+    <a href="#audio" class="element">audio</a>
+    <a href="#video" class="element">video</a>
+    .</p>
   </div>
   <div id="details">
     <p>Each separate

Index: script.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/script.html,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -d -r1.8 -r1.9
--- script.html	2 Aug 2009 07:07:46 -0000	1.8
+++ script.html	16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000	1.9
@@ -3,8 +3,7 @@
   <div id="shortdesc">embedded script</div>
   <div id="longdesc">
     <p>The <a href="#script" class="element">script</a> element
-    allows authors to include dynamic script and data blocks in
-    their documents.</p>
+    dynamic script and data blocks to be included in documents.</p>
   </div>
   <div id="attributes">
     <dl>

Index: style.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/style.html,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -d -r1.5 -r1.6
--- style.html	25 Feb 2009 08:07:57 -0000	1.5
+++ style.html	16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000	1.6
@@ -2,9 +2,10 @@
   <h4>The style element</h4>
   <div id="shortdesc">style (presentation) information</div>
   <div id="longdesc">
-    <p>The <a href="#style" class="element">style</a> element
-    allows authors to embed style information in their
-    documents.</p>
+    <p>The
+    <a href="#style" class="element">style</a>
+    element
+    allows style information to be embedded in documents.</p>
   </div>
   <div id="attributes">
     <dl>
@@ -17,23 +18,12 @@
     </dl>
     <dl>
       <dt id="style.attrs.scoped">scoped</dt>
-      <dd>Instructs the UA to
-        apply the specified style information only to the <a
-          href="#style" class="element">style</a> element’s parent
-        element, and that element’s child nodes. Otherwise, the
-        specified styles must, if applied, be applied to the
+      <dd>Indicates that the specified style information is meant
+        to apply only to the
+        <a href="#style" class="element">style</a>
+        element’s parent element, and that element’s child nodes.
+        Otherwise, the specified styles are meant to apply to the
         entire document.</dd>
     </dl>
-    <dl>
-      <dt id="style.attrs.title">title</dt>
-      <dd>Defines <a href="#alternative">alternative style sheet
-          sets</a>. If the 
-        <a href="#style" class="element">style</a> 
-        element has no <span class="attribute">title</span>
-        attribute, then it has no title; the <span
-          class="attribute">title</span> attribute of ancestors
-        does not apply to the <a href="#style"
-          class="attribute">style</a> element.</dd>
-    </dl>
   </div>
 </div>

Index: audio.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/audio.html,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -d -r1.4 -r1.5
--- audio.html	15 Jun 2009 20:27:02 -0000	1.4
+++ audio.html	16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000	1.5
@@ -12,9 +12,8 @@
     </dl>
     <dl>
       <dt id="audio.attrs.autobuffer">autobuffer</dt>
-      <dd>Instructs the UA that the author believes that
-        downloading the entire audio stream optimistically will be
-        worthwhile.</dd>
+      <dd>Instructs the UA that downloading the entire audio
+        stream optimistically is considered worthwhile.</dd>
     </dl>
     <dl>
       <dt id="audio.attrs.autoplay">autoplay</dt>

Index: meta.name.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/meta.name.html,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -d -r1.2 -r1.3
--- meta.name.html	13 Feb 2009 12:07:30 -0000	1.2
+++ meta.name.html	16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000	1.3
@@ -30,9 +30,7 @@
         attribute is set to "<code>description</code>",
         the value of the <a
           href="#meta.name.attrs.content">content</a> attribute
-        must be a string that describes the page. The value
-        must be appropriate for use in, for example, a
-        search-results page from a search engine.</dd>
+        must be a string that describes the page.</dd>
     </dl>
     <dl>
       <dt>generator</dt>
@@ -42,9 +40,7 @@
           href="#meta.name.attrs.content">content</a> attribute
         must be a string
         that identifies the software used to generate the
-        document. If the page is hand-authored, the
-        "<code>generator</code>" metadata name must not be
-        used.</dd>
+        document.</dd>
     </dl>
     <dl>
       <dt>application-name</dt>
@@ -53,10 +49,7 @@
         the value of the <a
           href="#meta.name.attrs.content">content</a> attribute
         must be a string representing the name of the Web
-        application that the page represents. If the page is
-        not a Web application, the
-        "<code>application-name</code>" metadata name must not be
-        used.</dd>
+        application that the page represents.</dd>
     </dl>
     <p>A <dfn id="registered-metadata-name" >registered metadata
       name</dfn> is any metadata name registered in the central <a

Index: bdo.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/bdo.html,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -d -r1.3 -r1.4
--- bdo.html	8 Jan 2009 10:19:31 -0000	1.3
+++ bdo.html	16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000	1.4
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
   <h4>The bdo element</h4>
   <div id="shortdesc">BiDi override</div>
   <div id="longdesc">
-    <p>The <a href="#bdo" class="element">bdo</a> element allows
-    authors to override the Unicode BiDi algorithm by explicitly
-    specifying a direction override.</p>
+    <p>The <a href="#bdo" class="element">bdo</a> element provides
+    a means to specify a direction override of the Unicode BiDi
+    algorithm.</p>
   </div>
 </div>
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