- From: Michael Smith via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
- Date: Sun, 16 Aug 2009 15:46:30 +0000
- To: public-html-commits@w3.org
Update of /sources/public/html5/markup/elements
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv12172/elements
Modified Files:
audio.html base.html bdo.html meta.name.html script.html
source.html style.html
Log Message:
various wording changes
Index: base.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/base.html,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -d -r1.4 -r1.5
--- base.html 8 Jun 2009 00:53:37 -0000 1.4
+++ base.html 16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000 1.5
@@ -2,10 +2,11 @@
<h4>The base element</h4>
<div id="shortdesc">base URL</div>
<div id="longdesc">
- <p>The <a href="#base" class="element">base</a> element allows
- authors to specify a document’s base URL for the purposes of
- resolving relative URLs, and the name of the default browsing
- context for the purposes of following hyperlinks.</p>
+ <p>The <a href="#base" class="element">base</a> element
+ specifies a document-wide base URL for the purposes of
+ resolving relative URLs, and document-wide default
+ <a href="#context">browsing context</a> name
+ for the purposes of following hyperlinks.</p>
</div>
<div id="attributes">
<dl>
@@ -15,8 +16,7 @@
<dl>
<dt id="base.attrs.target">target</dt>
<dd>A <a href="#context">browsing context</a> name or
- keyword. UAs use this value when following
- hyperlinks.</dd>
+ keyword for use in following hyperlinks.</dd>
</dl>
</div>
</div>
Index: source.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/source.html,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -d -r1.8 -r1.9
--- source.html 2 Aug 2009 07:07:46 -0000 1.8
+++ source.html 16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000 1.9
@@ -2,10 +2,14 @@
<h4>The source element</h4>
<div id="shortdesc">media source</div>
<div id="longdesc">
- <p>The <a href="#source" class="element">source</a> element
- allows authors to specify multiple
- <a href="#media-source">media sources</a>
- for media elements.</p>
+ <p>The
+ <a href="#source" class="element">source</a>
+ element
+ enables multiple <a href="#media-source">media sources</a> to
+ be specified for
+ <a href="#audio" class="element">audio</a>
+ <a href="#video" class="element">video</a>
+ .</p>
</div>
<div id="details">
<p>Each separate
Index: script.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/script.html,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -d -r1.8 -r1.9
--- script.html 2 Aug 2009 07:07:46 -0000 1.8
+++ script.html 16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000 1.9
@@ -3,8 +3,7 @@
<div id="shortdesc">embedded script</div>
<div id="longdesc">
<p>The <a href="#script" class="element">script</a> element
- allows authors to include dynamic script and data blocks in
- their documents.</p>
+ dynamic script and data blocks to be included in documents.</p>
</div>
<div id="attributes">
<dl>
Index: style.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/style.html,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -d -r1.5 -r1.6
--- style.html 25 Feb 2009 08:07:57 -0000 1.5
+++ style.html 16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000 1.6
@@ -2,9 +2,10 @@
<h4>The style element</h4>
<div id="shortdesc">style (presentation) information</div>
<div id="longdesc">
- <p>The <a href="#style" class="element">style</a> element
- allows authors to embed style information in their
- documents.</p>
+ <p>The
+ <a href="#style" class="element">style</a>
+ element
+ allows style information to be embedded in documents.</p>
</div>
<div id="attributes">
<dl>
@@ -17,23 +18,12 @@
</dl>
<dl>
<dt id="style.attrs.scoped">scoped</dt>
- <dd>Instructs the UA to
- apply the specified style information only to the <a
- href="#style" class="element">style</a> element’s parent
- element, and that element’s child nodes. Otherwise, the
- specified styles must, if applied, be applied to the
+ <dd>Indicates that the specified style information is meant
+ to apply only to the
+ <a href="#style" class="element">style</a>
+ element’s parent element, and that element’s child nodes.
+ Otherwise, the specified styles are meant to apply to the
entire document.</dd>
</dl>
- <dl>
- <dt id="style.attrs.title">title</dt>
- <dd>Defines <a href="#alternative">alternative style sheet
- sets</a>. If the
- <a href="#style" class="element">style</a>
- element has no <span class="attribute">title</span>
- attribute, then it has no title; the <span
- class="attribute">title</span> attribute of ancestors
- does not apply to the <a href="#style"
- class="attribute">style</a> element.</dd>
- </dl>
</div>
</div>
Index: audio.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/audio.html,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -d -r1.4 -r1.5
--- audio.html 15 Jun 2009 20:27:02 -0000 1.4
+++ audio.html 16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000 1.5
@@ -12,9 +12,8 @@
</dl>
<dl>
<dt id="audio.attrs.autobuffer">autobuffer</dt>
- <dd>Instructs the UA that the author believes that
- downloading the entire audio stream optimistically will be
- worthwhile.</dd>
+ <dd>Instructs the UA that downloading the entire audio
+ stream optimistically is considered worthwhile.</dd>
</dl>
<dl>
<dt id="audio.attrs.autoplay">autoplay</dt>
Index: meta.name.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/meta.name.html,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -d -r1.2 -r1.3
--- meta.name.html 13 Feb 2009 12:07:30 -0000 1.2
+++ meta.name.html 16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000 1.3
@@ -30,9 +30,7 @@
attribute is set to "<code>description</code>",
the value of the <a
href="#meta.name.attrs.content">content</a> attribute
- must be a string that describes the page. The value
- must be appropriate for use in, for example, a
- search-results page from a search engine.</dd>
+ must be a string that describes the page.</dd>
</dl>
<dl>
<dt>generator</dt>
@@ -42,9 +40,7 @@
href="#meta.name.attrs.content">content</a> attribute
must be a string
that identifies the software used to generate the
- document. If the page is hand-authored, the
- "<code>generator</code>" metadata name must not be
- used.</dd>
+ document.</dd>
</dl>
<dl>
<dt>application-name</dt>
@@ -53,10 +49,7 @@
the value of the <a
href="#meta.name.attrs.content">content</a> attribute
must be a string representing the name of the Web
- application that the page represents. If the page is
- not a Web application, the
- "<code>application-name</code>" metadata name must not be
- used.</dd>
+ application that the page represents.</dd>
</dl>
<p>A <dfn id="registered-metadata-name" >registered metadata
name</dfn> is any metadata name registered in the central <a
Index: bdo.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/bdo.html,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -d -r1.3 -r1.4
--- bdo.html 8 Jan 2009 10:19:31 -0000 1.3
+++ bdo.html 16 Aug 2009 15:46:28 -0000 1.4
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
<h4>The bdo element</h4>
<div id="shortdesc">BiDi override</div>
<div id="longdesc">
- <p>The <a href="#bdo" class="element">bdo</a> element allows
- authors to override the Unicode BiDi algorithm by explicitly
- specifying a direction override.</p>
+ <p>The <a href="#bdo" class="element">bdo</a> element provides
+ a means to specify a direction override of the Unicode BiDi
+ algorithm.</p>
</div>
</div>
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