html5/html-author Overview.html,1.14,1.15 Overview.src.html,1.14,1.15

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--- Overview.html	24 Oct 2008 10:03:16 -0000	1.14
+++ Overview.html	19 Nov 2008 17:18:27 -0000	1.15
@@ -37,16 +37,16 @@
    <p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img alt=W3C height=48
     src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" width=72></a> <!--end-logo-->
 
-   <h1 id=the-web>The Web Developer’s Guide to HTML 5</h1>
+   <h1>The Web Developer’s Guide to HTML 5</h1>
 
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=w3c-editors>W3C Editor’s Draft 24 October
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=w3c-editors>W3C Editor’s Draft 19 November
     2008</h2>
 
    <dl>
     <dt>This version:
 
     <dd><a
-     href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/ED-html5-author-20081024">http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/ED-html5-author-20081024</a>
+     href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/ED-html5-author-20081119">http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/ED-html5-author-20081119</a>
 
     <dt>Latest version:
 
@@ -246,19 +246,23 @@
 
   <h2 id=introduction><span class=secno>1. </span>Introduction</h2>
 
-  <p>The World Wide Web’s markup language has always been HTML. HTML was
-   primarily designed as a language for semantically describing scientific
-   documents, although its general design and adaptations over the years has
-   enabled it to be used to describe a number of other types of documents.
+  <p>The most common format for publishing documents on the web and creating
+   web applications is HTML. From its beginning as a relatively simple
+   language primarily designed for describing scientific documents, it has
+   grown and adapted to a wide variety needs ranging from publishing news and
+   blogs, to providing the foundation for full blown applications for email,
+   maps, word processing and spreadsheets.
 
-  <p>The main area that has not been adequately addressed by HTML is a vague
-   subject referred to as Web Applications. HTML5 attempts to rectify this,
-   while at the same time updating the HTML specifications to address issues
-   raised in the past few years. However, the HTML5 specification is very
-   much written to meet the needs of implementers rather than web designers
-   and developers, making it more difficult to read and understand. This
-   document is intended to meet the needs of web developers by focussing on
-   document conformance criteria and authoring guidelines.
+  <p>As the uses of HTML have grown, the demands placed upon it by authors
+   have increased and the limitations of HTML become more pronounced. HTML 5
+   is attempting to fill these limitations with new features designed
+   specifically the address the needs of authors.
+
+  <p>However, the way the HTML5 specification is written is very much
+   targeted towards implementers rather than web designers and developers,
+   making it more difficult to read and understand. This document is intended
+   to meet the needs of web developers by focussing on document conformance
+   criteria and authoring guidelines.
 
   <p>Authors who are familiar with previous versions of HTML are advised to
    familiarise themselves with <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/html5-diff/">the

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 	<h2>Introduction</h2>
 
-	<p>The World Wide Web’s markup language has always been HTML. HTML was
-	   primarily designed as a language for semantically describing scientific
-	   documents, although its general design and adaptations over the years has
-	   enabled it to be used to describe a number of other types of documents.</p>
+	<p>The most common format for publishing documents on the web and creating
+	   web applications is HTML.  From its beginning as a relatively simple
+	   language primarily designed for describing scientific documents, it has
+	   grown and adapted to a wide variety needs ranging from publishing news
+	   and blogs, to providing the foundation for full blown applications for
+	   email, maps, word processing and spreadsheets.</p>
 
-	<p>The main area that has not been adequately addressed by HTML is a vague
-	   subject referred to as Web Applications. HTML5 attempts to rectify this,
-	   while at the same time updating the HTML specifications to address issues
-	   raised in the past few years. However, the HTML5 specification is very
-	   much written to meet the needs of implementers rather than web designers
-	   and developers, making it more difficult to read and understand. This
-	   document is intended to meet the needs of web developers by focussing on
-	   document conformance criteria and authoring guidelines.</p>
+	<p>As the uses of HTML have grown, the demands placed upon it by authors
+	   have increased and the limitations of HTML become more pronounced.
+	   HTML 5 is attempting to fill these limitations with new features designed
+	   specifically the address the needs of authors.</p>
+
+	<p>However, the way the HTML5 specification is written is very much targeted
+	   towards implementers rather than web designers and developers, making it
+	   more difficult to read and understand. This document is intended to meet
+	   the needs of web developers by focussing on document conformance criteria
+	   and authoring guidelines.</p>
 
 	<p>Authors who are familiar with previous versions of HTML are advised to
 	   familiarise themselves with <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/html5-diff/">the differences from HTML 4</a> [HTML4DIFF]</p>

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