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From: Michael Smith via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Thu, 29 May 2008 13:45:34 +0000
To: public-html-commits@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1K1iRi-0007G5-45@lionel-hutz.w3.org>

Update of /sources/public/html5/pubnotes
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv27795

Modified Files:
	Overview.html Overview.src.html 
Log Message:
made addition/refinement from AVK


Index: Overview.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/pubnotes/Overview.html,v
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diff -u -d -r1.221 -r1.222
--- Overview.html	29 May 2008 11:23:21 -0000	1.221
+++ Overview.html	29 May 2008 13:45:31 -0000	1.222
@@ -2783,12 +2783,12 @@
           <h2>Section 6.2, Server-sent DOM events</h2>
           <p>This normative section describes a mechanism for allowing
           servers to dispatch DOM events into documents that
-          expect it. In this section, a number of changes were
-          made — including the addition of language related to
+          expect it. In this section, the specification for the
+          server-sent events format was rewritten; among the specific
+          changes made were the addition of language related to
           <strong>reconnection time</strong> and the <strong>last
-            event ID string</strong>; particularly significant
-          changes were made to the “Interpreting an event stream”
-          subsection.</p>
+            event ID string</strong>, and extensive changes to the
+          “Interpreting an event stream” subsection.</p>
         </div>
         <div id="connection" class="section">
           <h2>Section 6.3, Network connections</h2>

Index: Overview.src.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/pubnotes/Overview.src.html,v
retrieving revision 1.215
retrieving revision 1.216
diff -u -d -r1.215 -r1.216
--- Overview.src.html	29 May 2008 11:23:21 -0000	1.215
+++ Overview.src.html	29 May 2008 13:45:31 -0000	1.216
@@ -2822,12 +2822,12 @@
           <h2>Section 6.2, Server-sent DOM events</h2>
           <p>This normative section describes a mechanism for allowing
           servers to dispatch DOM events into documents that
-          expect it. In this section, a number of changes were
-          made — including the addition of language related to
+          expect it. In this section, the specification for the
+          server-sent events format was rewritten; among the specific
+          changes made were the addition of language related to
           <strong>reconnection time</strong> and the <strong>last
-            event ID string</strong>; particularly significant
-          changes were made to the “Interpreting an event stream”
-          subsection.</p>
+            event ID string</strong>, and extensive changes to the
+          “Interpreting an event stream” subsection.</p>
         </section>
         <section id=connection>
           <h2>Section 6.3, Network connections</h2>
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