html5/pubnotes Overview.src.html,1.303,1.304

Update of /sources/public/html5/pubnotes
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv5250

Modified Files:
	Overview.src.html 
Log Message:
a variety of minor editorial changes


Index: Overview.src.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/pubnotes/Overview.src.html,v
retrieving revision 1.303
retrieving revision 1.304
diff -u -d -r1.303 -r1.304
--- Overview.src.html	9 Jul 2008 20:57:53 -0000	1.303
+++ Overview.src.html	9 Jul 2008 21:15:43 -0000	1.304
@@ -801,9 +801,9 @@
                     <em class=highlight>(and that no additional
                       line cap is added)</em>.</q></li>
                   <li>Text specifying “gradient interpolation” was
-                  revised to specify both and <q>interpolation and
+                  revised to specify both an <q>interpolation and
                     extrapolation</q>.</li>
-                  <li>The “Shadows” subsection was update to state
+                  <li>The “Shadows” subsection was updated to state
                   that support for shadows is a requirement (in
                   previous drafts, it had stated that such support
                   was optional).</li>
@@ -982,7 +982,8 @@
                 Document to which the attribute node
                 belongs.</q></li>
               <li>In the algorithm for determining whether two
-              origins are of the same origin, <q>If either A [the
+              origins are of the same origin, the following
+              statement was added: <q>If either A [the
                 first origin to be compared] or B [the second
                 origin to be compared] have additional data, but
                 that data is not identical for both, return
@@ -1070,7 +1071,8 @@
               <li>In the “Dialogs implemented using separate
               documents” subsection, in a step in the algorithm
               that user agents must run when the <code
-                class=method>showModalDialog()</code> method, the
+                class=method>showModalDialog()</code> method is
+              invoked, the
               phrase “browsing context of the Window object that
               is the script execution context” was replaced with
               the phrase <q>script browsing context</q>.</li>

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